Moon_Spark

btw this novel has great potential Im looking forward to it!

first time reviewing so Ill keep it short and sweet. I loved the prelude. it really drew me towards this novel. the first 30+ chapters of intro tho was a bit harsh. It introduced the character that is now not the same in many ways but it also gave us a lot of unnecessary content In my honest opinion, I had to skip a few chapters and still felt as if I didn't miss anything at all. going into the start of the story tho, I have developed an attachment to this novel its great! so keep up the good work and keep us hooked. a bit disappointed that there hasn't been an update as of yet, but as they say.. when life gives you lemons.. well you know the rest. cheers for a good read. 👍