Webnovel Author: KhadaFourJhin - Fanfic Collection

Yeah except the hourglass is darker blue. He can also manually turn it off and instead of turning red it is just dimmer to represent how much power he has left

Starfire is actually a good idea. I might do that.

Unlike Kane, I imagined Elsa as her for some reason. Probably because her name is Anna but this fits fine.

This too

Didn't think too much about how he looked but I saw the Spider-man 2 game's trailer when thinking of this idea and thought this might fit.

Well, I'm going to have to disagree with most of this comment section. I can see its flaws and do think most of the criticism is good but sometimes I get frustrated that people say a movie is bad when it isn't what they were expecting. It was meant to be a detective story showcasing a character arc for Batman in his early days, yet people are saying he's too weak or the movie was too long when they spent almost the entire movie building up so many storylines, characters, and settings. The cinematography was amazing and this was the most comic accurate Batman in live-action, the soundtrack exceeds most other CBM movies and the story is more coherent than a lot of other stuff. If you don't enjoy it, it's perfectly fine but I do want people to know there is really beauty in it... a lot. I'm more of a spider-man guy and read every fanfiction, comic yet I still wholeheartedly think The Batman is such a better film than No way home, not including hype or experience. As in objectively in what makes a movie good. Check it out yourself!

I didn't find it long nor slow, they were telling a coherent story and I appreciated that. There were elements of stealth just not ninja-like, which is understandable considering he wasn't trained by ninjas in this iteration. He's walking because he's been tanking and fighting guys with guns throughout the course of days. It's meant to be a real detective take and you were expecting fighting and martial arts. I do think it is flawed to some degree with other elements but its fight, choreography, and the story is a lot better than most of the things that have come before it.

She's showing too much expression over things she shouldn't really show about. Well, it is what it is, hoping it tones down, if the author is trying to go for expressions then maybe using another character would be better, not the cold-blooded agent that's been trained since a little child. Love the story though.