Webnovel Author: Dragonfly_SS - Fanfic&Novel Collection

.......................................Abandoned................................................................................................................................................................

He says it's not abandoned but yet here he is a month later with no work to show.

Then where you been?

Yo, give me your thoughts on this, also, don't be too harsh when judging the writing, as I only started writing a few months ago, so I have a lot of room for improvement.

the word char was supposed to be chart.

It's abandoned! I repeat! it has gone under! prepare the lifeboats! gather the women and children! Cast the anchor! Pull the sails! Hurry Cut off the captain's head and offer it to the void as repentance! Pray for God's mercy! We can make it through this! Private! Bring me the hourglass! We can still char our way out of this storm! Looking over, the vice-captain spotted something in the distance, its mass gathering at one point before forming into a large mass, its single visible eye shaking him to his core. Looking on in horror, he could only mutter, "I'm sorry... Ru." At sun's peak, the bodies of all 22 hundred passengers of the stunning ray were found washed up on the shore of Tore, their mangled and mutilated corpses coming nowhere near close enough to what human physiologies should look like. However, despite finding every single passenger known to have bordered the vessel, none of the crew or captain could be found; almost like they vanished, wiped from the face of the earth, with only the stunning ray remaining as their last bastion; Its untouched form too chilling for anyone to willing to step foot on its deck, leaving the mystery of what happened to them a national question, its answer reaming unfound to this day.

Not a full five stars, but a lot higher because Clementine didn't have her body yoinked. NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT NEAT

I don't think you can change it.

That's nice to know.