Webnovel Author: ThienQuangHuynh - Novel Collection

ajustment?

language 😏

such a colorful world with rare colorful people 😅

haiz, crushing and rejecting, if one hasn't been in these situations, they will certainly be, at least once in their student ages 🤣

from here, i wanna talk about your writing style, not the story in general, it is uncommon to have a chapter that is 4 pages shorter, but i guess thats fine, but the sentences though, the way you write " , " is odd, usually, the punctuation should be ", " btw, some parts were repeated somewhere between chapter 1 and 2, hope you'll fix this :)

i remember web novel allows you to write the prologue specifically earlier, you don't need to add it to the first chapter :)

seeing those errors and skills tho. so far I felt like the characters are inside a game 🙂 btw careful with spacing and capital letters (of it was unintentional)

poor lil' rabbit

wait why my name is there at the bottom right

started off quite good