Webnovel Author: VWjam - Novel Collection

The story flows from chapter to chapter which is refreshing. Enough details are given, so the settings are clear and easy to imagine. The characters are okay, and the MC is endearingly silly and entertaining. The descriptions and instructions of cultivation are also easy to grasp, which I appreciate since cultivation stories are a bit intimidating. Overall, I'm curious to how the MC will develop in the future. Nice!

Thanks for the review! 😊

Thanks for the review!

The writing quality is ok. It sometimes switches between past and present tense which is a little startling, but it doesn't subtract from the overall plotline. The story is easy to digest but some of the scenarios are wordy. If the grammar is cleaned up and the sentences are a little more compact, the reading experience will be more enriched. Also, it was a little difficult to picture the city setting as a whole. But the characters are ok. They're still developing, so I don't have a favorite character yet (but I do dislike--in the sense that I am enjoying the plotline--the ML. He's just doing what he needs to do, but, like, still...). There's a lot to look forward to.