Khawla_Amini

Khawla_Amini

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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The concept of a "Class Developer" managing their own clones seems like an interesting and unique premise that could lead to an engaging fantasy narrative. Definitely a must-read story.

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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The concept of two worlds colliding holds a lot of potential for an engaging narrative. The free access allows readers to dive in and experience the unfolding events firsthand. For those interested in fantasy stories with a unique twist, "Machina Arcanis: Two Worlds Collided" is worth checking out.

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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Overall, the author provides a solid introduction to the story and world of "My Shard Bearer System - Elias's Legacy". The concept is unique and the execution so far is promising, leaving me interested to see how the full narrative unfolds. The author has done a good job of hooking the reader and making them want to read more.

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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Overall, "Finding my Parents in Another World" shows promise as an engaging fantasy novel with a unique premise and an intriguing protagonist. While there are areas for improvement, such as deeper characterization and more expansive world-building, the current information suggests an entertaining read that leaves the reader eager to see what happens next. With more development and reader feedback, this story could become a standout in the fantasy genre. Keep up the good work👌

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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Overall, the first chapter of "Oops, I Accidentally Became the Sect's Greatest Teacher!" is a promising start that showcases the author's storytelling abilities. The engaging protagonist, intriguing premise, and smooth pacing make this an enjoyable read that leaves the reader eager to see what happens next.

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Khawla_Amini
10 months ago
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It is interesting how the story follows a familiar isekai premise, where the protagonist, Kenji , is reborn into a fantastical realm and finds himself endowed with the rare and formidable power of necromancy. Yet, it's way better than to be called familiar as so far, it gives a feeling that a unique twist is promised to make the journey captivating. In the early chapters, we witness Kenji's determined efforts to hone his necromantic skills and climb the ranks to become an elite SSS-Class adventurer, facing daunting challenges and drawing the attention of allies and adversaries alike, hinting at the intrigue and obstacles that likely lie ahead.

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Khawla_Amini
3 years ago
Replied to Sharissa_Clemente

Thanks 😍😍 I hope you like the story either 😊

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Khawla_Amini
4 years ago
Posted

I'm not used to stories that looks like scripts... Yet, I found this one quite interesting. It'a a bit slow pace at the start... Still, it gets quite interesting after the few first chapters. Good story, and I love it ❤

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Khawla_Amini
4 years ago
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Without spoilers, this book is amazing. Good pace, interesting twists, so I expect fascinating cliffhangers in the upcoming chapters. Keep up autour.

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Khawla_Amini
4 years ago
Commented

I guess Aurora is sort of like to a prophecy that link her to the beast as his mate or imprint. Perhaps, her not ever seeing mother is not a human at all, and something that screams power and deadly secrets - has to do with unusual look. That's I guess could be the reason why she was kept locked at her place. It was mentioned that she doesn't look likr her father, which got me thinking that her father isn't her real father. He was just someone who took the initiative to protect her, and claimed that she was a love child, insitead of going further with her real story.

  • The Mafia King's Lover: Taming Red original

    The Mafia King's Lover: Taming Red

    Urban WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN REVENGE ENEMIESTOLOVERS MAFIA NOROMANCE

    I've never expected my life to turn out the way it is. I mean, I was just an ordinary girl... until I met him. Marco Keller. The mafia underboss who's a cop by day, and a monster with a past so dark that even the shadows couldn't hold it by night. He's the kind of guy that can make you feel like you're walking on air one minute and then drop you into the deepest hole the next. But.... Let me tell you, meeting him wasn't a choice. It was fate - And in a strange way, I couldn't run from it... not that I ever truly tried.

    9 Chs 2 Collections

  • The King's Mate Is a Dark Luna original

    The King's Mate Is a Dark Luna

    Fantasy WEREWOLF VAMPIRE POSSESSIVE ALPHA

    One mate is a blessing, two are a curse, I've learned it all the hard way. My life was as perfect as a life could be. Never notice it until I've lost it all. I'm an alpha line that also has a loving, carrying high-ranking mate. Not to mention that I'm always praised for how I look. I was what every she-wolf dreamed to be. Well, all of that changed when a stranger visited our pack. My entire world froze when my eye spot his seraphic eyes. I felt the same pull I've always felt toward my mate. Yet, a bit stronger. A stranger that is no one but the Alpha King himself. My entire idyllic world fell apart as I wasn't able to decide. Should I give a chance to the new pull I'm feeling for the alpha king, or to stay loyal to the one who's always been by my side.

    11 Chs 26 Collections

  • Mated To The Enemy: Loving The Wolf original

    Mated To The Enemy: Loving The Wolf

    Fantasy WEAKTOSTRONG WEREWOLF VAMPIRE FATEDLOVE LOVETRIANGLE ALPHA PRINCESS

    4.76

    As a princess, my life shall be dreamy and full of happiness. Yet, this is not what it’s all about. My name is Tiana, daughter of king ‘Luther Dunkan’ – the dark vampire king, and … Well, I know nothing about my own mother, and I care less about the one who gave up on me when I needed her the most. I’m nearly reaching my 200 years, the legitimate age for me to take hold of my rights as a vampire queen. Yet, as a female vampire – I need a male vampire to rule by my side. Though I believe I’m a queen that needs no king by her side, still I have to pick someone. Things shall have to go smoothly, pick a noble, true blood vampire, marry him and rule together, and pretend to have your happy ending. See, easy and smooth things were not part of my fate, and I happened to learn that only when I met him - my destined mate.

    64 Chs 365 Collections

  • W.S : The Hybrid original

    W.S : The Hybrid

    Sci-fi WEAKTOSTRONG REVENGE WEREWOLF VAMPIRE APOCALYPSE LOVETRIANGLE

    4.54

    I was a weak human; he was the Lycan king. Fate bonds us through a beautiful love story, at least that's what I used to believe. Then I discovered that I'm nothing more than a human pet for him, a sexual tool as he liked to call me. He won't ever love me out of the mate bond, and I'm too weak to be his queen. Well, this Queen doesn't need a king, not anymore. Now that I'm ready to give up on my human side, he'll soon learn that he wasn't supposed to mess with me, not to mess with the 'Hybrid'.

    1 Chs 78 Collections