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and actually if you have any suggestions later on that you'd think that would make her seem like "a better mafia leader" than I'll be more than happy to take those suggestions. This is my first time ever writing a novel surrounding the mafia. I did it for a contest, but im still going even after the contest is over. It's a learning experience for me, so if you have any suggestions then im all ears. :)
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Urban · QingMojidori
Well actually if you keep reading you'd understand why she won't give him 20k. Ace is the type of person where she doesn't feel like she owes anyone anything. She might have her merciful moments, but she has a reason for everything. The reason why she didn't give the money to him is later explained and it's also a respect thing once you find out why she didn't give him the money. She's not just gonna give some guy money because he demanded it and threatened her. She isn't weak like that. She puts whoever tries to tell her what to do in their place.
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Urban · QingMojidori
nope Ace is the girl
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Urban · QingMojidori
her attitude is everything XD
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Fantasy · iam_adh
Wow I wonder what's actually happening! I can't wait to find out why he's there and who he is!
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Fantasy · iam_adh
Omg, I love her already
"Yeaaah, if I wanted to let any of y'all go, I wouldn't be hopping! Towards! The! Door!" She exclaimed, emphasizing each word with a hop towards the exit, which was just a normal wooden door. Hanging on a hook beside the door was something that caught my eye. It was a set of twelve keys, all with different initials on them, which the girl didn't notice until she was already at the door.
Realistic · Jacket_Josh
OoOOoO I'm hooked! I'm happy I found time to start reading your book! I'm liking it so far.
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Fantasy · iam_adh
No it's fine! Don't be sorry! It's all cool. XD
They call her Ace
Urban · QingMojidori