Hi! I'm a 24-year-old reader who's just began her journey as a writer. I'm also a feminist and a daydreamer.
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Hi there! thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'll make sure to take this into account for when I edit the first chapters. Cheers for reading!
Hey there! Thank you so much for your comments, I appreciate them so much!
What you say about the death of Adira's father is something I really do agree with. I think I downplayed it at first because the way they see it, death isn't something to be mourned but instead, the beginning of a new adventure. Still, the moment I go back to the first chapters I want to the emotions of the characters to be more obvious in the history. Also, thanks for pointing out what you said about the fact of Adira being Queen! The way I imagined this, I guess Mirro and the other lords had the hopes that Adira would marry or that her father would choose another heir since the tradition of only male heirs runs so deep. I'll make sure to change that too. Thank you so much for reading!!
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