Webnovel Author: JWhite_9988 - Novel Collection

JWhite_9988

1yr

Replied to JWhite_9988

Working on it still. Just going to say loose ends will be tied.

God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Posted

I'm writing reading 4 chapters and have to say I have a hard time putting it down. I love the story, humor, and characters so far. Great read to pass time or simply to have something to read. Sidenote: I see what you mean about spacing sentences. Going to try it with latest chapter of my book.

God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Commented

All Hail King Rusty!

ch 0 4 It Takes a Lot to Make Camelot Camelot

God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Commented

I'm definitely getting a Lobo vibe xD

ch 0 2 Up and Moving

God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Commented

Uh Oh you got some explaining to do lol

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God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Commented

I like the start and the characterization

ch 0 1 Down and Losing

God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Commented

couldn't help but chuckle at this part, in a good way. reminds me a little of someone I know

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God's Little Helpers

Fantasy · JustGoDie13

JWhite_9988

1yr

Replied to _Rockbison_

thanks for the review

Mark of the Jackal

Fantasy · JWhite_9988

JWhite_9988

1yr

Replied to JustGoDie13

Thanks for the review and advice. Should I possibly space it like every two sentences or how would u recommend?

Mark of the Jackal

Fantasy · JWhite_9988

JWhite_9988

2yr

Posted

The story is interesting and adds a twist to the ordinary VR game genre that usually is sometimes generic. I only read the first two chapters but find the story interesting so far. Keep up the good work!

Consume Me In This New World

Fantasy · CorwynGentry

JWhite_9988

2yr

Commented

Awesome start!

ch 0 1 Consume Me In This New World / Into The Unknown

Consume Me In This New World

Fantasy · CorwynGentry

JWhite_9988

2yr

Commented

I love the twist you have imagined and I can't wait to continue reading. Anyway, I would possibly try to figure out a way to break this paragraph into seperate ones. Kinda makes the flow of the story differ but not by much.