Webnovel Author: BLACK_ALPHA - Novel Collection

To be honest the story is good and I have completed 4 chapters. The initial chapters feel bit off(not storywise just word wise, langering and all) but as it progress with second, third and fourth it improves drastically also it's amusing. All in on its enjoyable.

First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.

Well I have to say the story is interesting, writing style and humor is good. Currently at chapter 4 I bing read 3 about to go for 4th really good job author

The story is interesting it had that thing of page turning which always made you wonder what happens next. Enjoys the read good job Author.

To begin with the story is interesting it's like you get curious to know more and turn pages to read further by way great work.

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The synopsis is cool, I just read first chapter and it make me to read more the descriptions of scenes even the dialogues were perfect. Great work Author.

The story is intruiguing and the opening scene of that stiching lady is marvellous. The book is interesting highly recommended.

It has mild issues with few dialgoues in first two chapters but the latter chapters are great. The descriptions and all were awesome. Though not being a fan of this genera I love the story. It's an interesting read.

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Well the book is good second chapter is captivating awesome work brother your book is spendid.

Well if I say the plot is a bit slow paced but the story is super addictive. Narrations and dialogues we're awesome. The characters are seems real and awesome. It's a must read book if you love some system novels with a twist of love this might be the best pick.

OK! Thanks for the review I will try to improve it

Thanks for the honest review I will try to improve that

Glad you like it thanks man🥂

🤣🤣Yup actually this book had a long journey first I started it here then go to MN but due to bad luck I get non-exclusive contract🥲😞 do no MAB no bonuses all you can count is readers unlocking premium chapters I waited and write for 6 months but can't able to get any of those premium readers also the completion bonus is 50$ so at last I terminate the contract and decide to pause this one for sometime🥂

Glad you like it thanks for such a great review bro☺🥂