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Distant_Tree
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Yea, but it would be boring writing another "sign up at the guild" scene so I skipped it. Just assume it happened in the background.
Finally, after our morning tribulations we left the church, Bell taking the lead as I slid into my shirt. We made our way towards the dungeon quickly, slipping through the morning crowds that clogged the roads.
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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To my understanding they only give up the ghost when there mana stone is hit.
I looked at Bell for a moment watching as he inexpertly cut into the corpse, digging his blade around in a vein hope of finding the monsters mana crystal.
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Yea I had a few similar ideas, depending on a few things, like his magic for example. Which I have already decided on, just trying to think of how to yoink the grimoire from Bell.
ch 0 9 An awkward start!!!
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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I will, have no doubt. Just not right now.
ch 0 8 Rewards! & Time with Hestia
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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This really is just a start, nothing serious hand holding~ at most, and even that might be too lewd.
ch 0 8 Rewards! & Time with Hestia
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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Well let me say this, in my admittedly very limited romantic experience things don't progress in a set pattern or in a "perfect" way. love is messy, romance is messy it is a jumble of sudden feelings and uncontrolled words. If you want a "perfect" romance go else were this will not be it, they will be awkward and maybe jump a few steps, maybe back step a few more.
ch 0 8 Rewards! & Time with Hestia
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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If it was me, I would as well, but I needed an excuse for Leo to progress a lot and plot convenience is the downfall of all logic.
ch 0 7 Monster Parade!
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Yep, cool show
ch 0 6 I'm a pugilist now?
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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Sure, but it doesn't change much, and this is a fan fic, also it's only the goblins.
Stepping forward from my leaning position on the wall, I intercepted the first sword strike with my dagger deflecting the blow off to my right as I created a small barrier out of the ambient mana (AM) that blocked and rebounded the other goblins attack.
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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I haven't fully decided but I'm thinking of keeping it like this in the future, maybe get him a pair of gauntlets or gloves for style points.
ch 0 6 I'm a pugilist now?
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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Shush... that's for... later
Smirking I manipulated the (AM), covering my hands and feet before I took a wide stance and stretched my hand forward, waving my hand in a [come hither'] gesture.
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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....maybe.
ch 0 5 Bell's first time~...Lol
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Neither did they do anything, and wont for a bit, little things like this here and there will happen though. You should know that Hestia is a highly affectionate person especially with Bell, Mc in this fic takes Bells place by "rescuing" her first, so in my mind quickly developing feelings make since for Hestia. Rest assured though nothing too serious will happen between them for a little bit longer, just physical contact/affection like in cannon.
We stared into reach other eyes Hestia's cheeks gaining a dark blush as we did, I leaned in placing my forehead agents hers as our lips crept closer. The moment was interrupted however when a bashful cough came from behind Hestia, we pulled back from one another as I looked around the goddess in my arms and saw another familiar character standing there, it was Bell Cranel the main character of Danmachi.
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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Fully agree on the two points you noted, as for the paragraph spacing, I think I got what you mean and in the chapter I post tomorrow I'll attempt to do that, so let me know if it's any good.
ch 0 3 Getting my Falna
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Thanks! I was confused as to why the extra spaces I was putting in weren't translating over to the posted chapter.
ch 0 3 Getting my Falna
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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I'll try to keep it to that schedule, but I have some stuff Irl that might interfere now and then.
ch 0 3 Getting my Falna
Birth of the Mind Wraith: Danmachi
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Any who have mind/magic people, monsters, the skill don't care.
ch 0 3 Getting my Falna
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+1
Harem all day e'ry day(Yes).
BNHA: Singularity
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