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The story is missing some *spice*, you know.. It's preatty bland - no humor, steriotipical characters, no butterfly effect, mc thinks he IS Kaido personality wise, 1 hit 1 kill fights. This story is missing a hook that keeps the readers reading. For me tge more I read the harder it was to read the next chapter because nothing interesting happened. Everything is predictable, so there weren't a lot of surprises. Now the system - the system makes the story worse, because the main point of this fanfic was "what would you do if you were Kaido?", obviously the answer wouldn't be you would cheat with a system, right? That defeats the whole purpose of this fanfic idea wise.

Well at least we have a target audience now xd

It's a good fanfic, but I expected more. I don't like a lot of things related to the system and objectively speaking the story is bland. Also, in the first mission they had to exterminate rats, but they didn't kill them because they felt sorry for rat family??? What's up with that??? So stupid.

I didn't like it, this fic is very narrow minded. The change in personality was not even necessary, author included it just for the sake of it. I also don't like the fact that he has a wierd background that transends worlds giving him the ability to connect with Artemis and probably other goddesses. It's just stupid, if anything she should be repelled by his nature and abilities.