New to writing. Lone wolf Feedback is appreciated, hate is not!
2020-09-12 Joined Mexico
Thanks for the feedback! And thank you for reading!
ch 25 Chapter 24
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Thank you for the review!
The voidwalkers are sponsoring Jacob, the other 1002 civilizations also sponsor a colony. And the same applies for each species participating in the games too. Apologies if this was convoluted! Thanks for being such a great reader!
ch 23 Chapter 22
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Thanks for reading! I’m glad your enjoying the book :)
It is not explained too well it seems. Thanks! But there are several colonies. Not just the ones you saw little sneak peeks of.
ch 13 Chapter 12
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Haha, every colonist can come from any place on the planet… Some names are given to me from AI. Let me know if this is innaproptiate or something :)
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Don't you worry about that, this is a sci fi novel after all hehe. But keep in mind that this is still day 2 afternoonish and they gotta make everything (they can't get from the store) essentially from scratch ;) I really appreciate your comments and feedback! thanks for being such a great reader :)
ch 17 Chapter 16
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There certainly will be many local predators to deal with in New Eden. You will have to keep reading to find out 😁
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
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Thank you! Im glad you enjoyed it!
Well, don’t worry there will be in future chapters. Just need to get things set up, there is much for me to write about :) it may be a bit slower these earlier chapters but I Intend for alot more fighting as time goes on. The fight scenes will be larger too. I hope you can stick around to find out :) Thanks for commenting and reading!
ch 16 Chapter 15
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Yes, there is a big universe out there. So there are many countless civilizations and species :)
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
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I’m glad you seem to be enjoying it :) I aim for atleast one a day for now :)
ch 0 8 Chapter 7
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Welcome back to the story! :)
ch 33 Chapter 32
Galactic Games
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