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MrBrightside

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You鈥檙e the main reason I can work full time and still make steady releases. I try to catch them all but coffee only does so much at 1am馃槀 Thank you for making edits a breeze.

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I have Grammarly free addition but it鈥檚 limited. Still helps out a lot though. Writing is a skill I鈥檝e ignored since graduating high school until recent events. I appreciate the patience people have with my writing.

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Yes its a typo that I can fix when I鈥檓 home. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I write in my spare time from work and most the time I鈥檓 stoned. Helps with writing the story itself but not the edits unfortunately. 馃槀

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This was done by my brother upon request. It was the original idea before final edits. Have others that will be shown for refrences. Not everything is drawn since he has reseves about certain subjects. Not to mention we both work.

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As Cameron neared the summit a pack of chimeras was examining their surroundings. They had thick dark fur and prowled around on four limbs. Trailing down their head were dense grey scales that wrapped around their chest. Its body resembled a giant jaguar, but the tail was barbed like a stingray dripping with toxins.

My Year Abroad

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And thats why you get CC. Ty for making edits easier. 馃憤馃徎

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My Year Abroad

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He is confusing it with anime powers.

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'When it happened I was bleeding, and desperate. The night before I was hurt as well, and my leg healed overnight. Maybe it's related to pain.'

My Year Abroad

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It was a reference to the scepter's basic fire recharging. There's a few seconds delay before the next shot. It was a common tactic for volleys to have half the group fire while the rest lets loose on the reload. This way you are constantly firing.

The children's scepters were meant for playing, but they still possessed the juice to light up a crystal. This was intended for all the children to play, but Elizabeth trained them into a supreme force. As the first line was recharging Helena raised her hand.

Building A New World

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Thank you for helping with the edits. 馃憤馃徎

"I didn't mean to rip her clothes." Yu lowered her head.

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