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Okay but let me put another quote from the wiki here: "Saiyans and their hybrid counterparts are naturally adept at using Ki. They generally have no difficulty manipulating their energy". It basically refutes what you're saying. It says it right there that they have no trouble with Ki Control lol. I'd like to also add that the MC's Ki wasn't enhancing him when he did the first lifts. That was just raw physical power. Goku struggled with 40 tons in the Buu Saga, so 5 tons is pretty high for what you're calling a 'weak' Saiyan.
I'd already figured out how to do the first thing. I could enhance my body so that it was three times stronger, harder and quicker. Which was only the beginning - it's lacking amount of enhancement was purely because of my lacking Ki Control. If I tried any higher than a 3x multiplier my Ki would break from my control, overload my body and cause damage. So here I was, cross-legged and held up by nothing but my tail as I started my meditation with deep breathing exercises.
DCAU: Saiyan
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I'm not doing power level stuff. Not even Dragon Ball does power level stuff anymore. It's too inconsistent. Besides, he's in the DC Universe. Why would I give the MC the ability to destroy planets after only having a PL of thousands? That's just a recipe for writing myself into a corner.
Okay, easy enough. "Okay, uh, my name is Ethan Blaine, I'm twenty-three years old and my favorite color is either red or yellow," or blue like your eyes I nearly said and I felt like smacking myself over the back of the head. Not the fucking time, Ethan. Fucking hell. Time and a place for something, and right now isn't the time to try and pathetically flirt with Wonder Woman!
DCAU: Saiyan
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There could be a logistics error or maybe they were playing a mental game to get him to admit something.
Why wasn't I in those records? Why did they look at me weird when I mentioned the Shard? Why did they keep saying my family and friends don't exist?
DCAU: Saiyan
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You're the first person to call the MC powerful lol. Anyway, the MC is winging it with his Ki training at the minute because he doesn't really have anyone to train him, so that's most likely why it doesn't feel like the original. I can't give you a rough estimate because I'm staying well away from PL stuff. Purely because if I add it, the protagonist's power-scaling will become ridiculous very quickly. It only takes thousands of PL to be able to destroy a whole planet, for instance. I don't want for that to happen because it doesn't mesh well with DC at all.
ch 0 5 Settling In & Changes (1)
DCAU: Saiyan
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Also, this isn't a db fanfic. It's a DC fanfic.
(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.
DCAU: Saiyan
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Ok. Goodbye then.
(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.
DCAU: Saiyan
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Taken straight from the official db wiki: "Saiyans have a natural affinity to control Ki energy" Now, if that doesn't say they can have Ki Control, I don't know what would. The reason Raditz didn't have Ki Control is because it isn't taught to Saiyans. They believe in raw power, not control of their power. They didn't think it was important but the MC knows otherwise. Also, yes they can lower their power. Vegeta lowered his power in the Namek/Frieza Saga so Krillin could injure him and so he could get an easy Zenkai Boost.
I'd already figured out how to do the first thing. I could enhance my body so that it was three times stronger, harder and quicker. Which was only the beginning - it's lacking amount of enhancement was purely because of my lacking Ki Control. If I tried any higher than a 3x multiplier my Ki would break from my control, overload my body and cause damage. So here I was, cross-legged and held up by nothing but my tail as I started my meditation with deep breathing exercises.
DCAU: Saiyan
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They don't. The training room on the Watchtower is less of a training room than you'd think and more of a way to measure new League members. Most DC heroes don't get stronger through training. Superman only needs to sunbathe. Wonder Woman is basically at her peak physically because of her divine nature. So on and so forth for the rest of the League too.
ch 0 5 Settling In & Changes (1)
DCAU: Saiyan
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You do realize I cannot realistically take your opinion into account because you just showed how biased you are when you admitted you're a dragon ball fanboy, right? I'm not trying to antagonize you either. Simply giving my opinion on your comment like you have on my story.
Okay, easy enough. "Okay, uh, my name is Ethan Blaine, I'm twenty-three years old and my favorite color is either red or yellow," or blue like your eyes I nearly said and I felt like smacking myself over the back of the head. Not the fucking time, Ethan. Fucking hell. Time and a place for something, and right now isn't the time to try and pathetically flirt with Wonder Woman!
DCAU: Saiyan
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I've upped his base height because I'm not gonna give him a massively enhanced height in a transformation. The MC isn't Broly; he just looks like him.
Hell, I was somehow noticing that I hadn't just gotten really muscular but that I'd gotten bigger overall. Taller, wider--I'd definitely shot up into the six foot region.
DCAU: Saiyan
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Well, he finished the first book and I guess he decided he didn't wanna continue it. It happens.
(Author Note: Okay, before you read I just wanna say something real quick. This fanfic has been an idea of mind ever since I read a story called 'Perspective Is Ki' by Elbowsnapper and said story is a massive inspiration for this story. So there will be similarities. The MC's won't really be anything like one another and neither will the plot after the first few chapters but I'd thought it better to say this than to act like my idea is completely original lol. Anyway, hope you enjoy the story!)
DCAU: Saiyan
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Onto other things, some of the people who open this book just don't read the synopsis, do they? Bloody hell. Granted, I'll admit, quite a few of the people who've spoken up in the comments have actually explained their reasonings and given me constructive criticism. So thank you, for those of you who have, but also thank you for all the people supporting me and giving me motivation to continue writing. It kinda sucks when people keep shitting on the MC or the premise for the book but thanks to the majority of you giving support I'm able to continue writing. Sincerely, you have my upmost thanks. Now, enough of the mushy, sappy crap. Onto the chapter!)
DCAU: Saiyan
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About 4,167 Big Macs from McDonalds.
I took a deep breath and gripped the bar tightly before heaving up in a deadlift movement. But it felt wrong. Too light. Like I'd somehow dropped the bar as I picked it up and yet I could still feel the sturdy metal in my hands. Grinning to myself, I lifted the bar further up my body and onto my chest before pushing it up above my head. It was more straining than just getting it to my waist but still far too light when I thought about the weight I was lifting.
DCAU: Saiyan
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None of that is nearly as simple as you're making it out to be. For one, you'd need to know the Speed Force formula to get the power and the same applies to the other Force-related powers. He doesn't have the Wiki or google with him and neither was he someone who memorized it just in case he somehow found himself in the DC universe. Needless to say, he's not in the right head space to be thinking up solutions either.
"Pity won't get me back home, Batgirl," I lightly snapped before realizing I'd let my annoyance get the better of me. Sighing, I apologized, "Sorry, I'm just...tired. It's been a hell of a day and I was just about to get to sleep before you came knocking at my door so you two are to blame for my crankiness, really," I joked with a somewhat forced laugh. I was annoyed at the reminder of my circumstances but I didn't want people to act like they were walking on eggshells around me either. That'd just annoy me even more.
DCAU: Saiyan
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Doing Martian Manhunter things.
"Sure," I replied while internally thinking about what she'd said. Full trust, huh? I doubt it'd ever happen but maybe I'm being a bit of a pessimist. I...don't think of myself as a paranoid person. Never really had much reason to doubt people this wholeheartedly but I haven't been in a situation that called for it as much as this either though, have I? It's not every day you find yourself alone in what you once thought was a fictional universe.
DCAU: Saiyan
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He recognized he's a Saiyan because the evidence is there. He has a tail, he's stronger, more aggressive/prone to anger, he literally has a tail, etc, etc. What evidence does he have for this being a different universe? Pretty much nothing.
Why wasn't I in those records? Why did they look at me weird when I mentioned the Shard? Why did they keep saying my family and friends don't exist?
DCAU: Saiyan
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...Oh no.
As coach always said, 'You don't have to stay calm, just stay focused'.
DCAU: Saiyan
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Because he commits way stronger feats before then and when he's even stronger (in the Buu Saga), he suddenly can't even hold up 40 tons without entering the Super Saiyan form.
(*A/n - Goku struggled to lift 40 tons in DBZ but it was an inconsistency in the story. So I've made a few changes to Saiyans. Meaning he'll eventually grow beyond that even in his base form.)
DCAU: Saiyan
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Then why are you reading DC at all? Character interactions, drama and suspense are what make DC great. Not all comic runs are "Hero fights villain and wins". A lot of the all-time great runs are about the hero struggling with something personal and overcoming it--or not overcoming it. Injustice is all about Superman dealing with the anger and grief of killing his wife (and unborn child) while under the effects of the fear toxin, and trying to adapt to that while changing how he treats 'helping' the world.
(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.
DCAU: Saiyan
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