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This comment has me watching Youtube videos of sentence structures. Thank you!
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I Opened Up A Therapy Clinic In A Cultivation World
Urban · Vixenhunts
I'll keep this in mind. I just wanted to do this scene because it was stuck in my mind for a while. There won't be much face slapping in the near future.
ch 0 2 Meeting An Demonic Cultivator
I Opened Up A Therapy Clinic In A Cultivation World
Urban · Vixenhunts
I did think I was going too fast so I'll be sure to slow it down from here on out. Thanks for the feedback!
ch 0 2 Meeting An Demonic Cultivator
I Opened Up A Therapy Clinic In A Cultivation World
Urban · Vixenhunts
Ruined it already. It's still probably a good book but not for someone like me who prefers non-human systems.
"So what if I am young? Do you want to fight," the girl said, while gritting her teeth—if she had any.
I Sell Fate Through A System
Eastern · Hyowha
Good first chapter. Excellent sentence structures.
ch 0 1 A Good Day to Die
I Sell Fate Through A System
Eastern · Hyowha
We just started and the Protag is already naked[img=recommend]
Atop an inconspicuous cliff, a male youth with long black hair squatted, unperturbed by anything. He left his hair free-flowing, covering his whole body as if he wore an ankle-length dress. He hid his face behind curtains of hair, only occasionally, did a slender arm poke out. Thus, if one didn't look closely, they wouldn't even realize the youth was naked.
I Sell Fate Through A System
Eastern · Hyowha
I don't take any offense, in fact, I really like advice like this.
I Opened Up A Therapy Clinic In A Cultivation World
Urban · Vixenhunts