I am an author and I just like to write for fun
2020-10-03 Joined Pakistan
Jinsang
The next day Jinrong comes to academy. He walks while being absent minded and is suddenly blended within a crowd he doesn't know why the crowd has collected so he asks a person about it. He replies that she is Wang sixi. She is now of the most beautiful girl in campus and is also 2nd ranked in Imperial academy. So, she is from Wang family and this all ruckus is created by her. Well in my opinion all this ruckus for one person is not worth it.
Fantasy · QATCOD
Well I really don't mind criticisms cause I know that they are due to my own lack of writing skills. And I will improve the earlier chapters I was not able to write because of my exams. Doo now I will rewrite my chapters.
ch 0 8 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 8--The challenge
Fantasy · QATCOD
It'll get better after some chapters.
ch 0 9 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 9-- The crowd
Fantasy · QATCOD
Actually these chapters will be rewritten after 20 or 30 chapters.
ch 28 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 28--End of Jin family
Fantasy · QATCOD
They did not live inside the Jin family mansion due to family issues so they were not killed but they were just a minor supporting character so I didn't feel it suitable to make another entrance but they will come back in upcoming chapters.
ch 28 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 28--End of Jin family
Fantasy · QATCOD
Well every review is valuable.
I will write it in sometime as I also understand this mistake of mine.
ch 0 1 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 1-- The Return V2
Fantasy · QATCOD
New chapters will be released soon.
ch 49 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 49--Arrival at Imperial City
Fantasy · QATCOD
I am aware of these problems and they will be resolved eventually because I will rewrite the first chapters after 100 chapters and it will not take much time.
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Fantasy · QATCOD
If you are reading the beginning chapters then this problem will occur but I solved this problem after some chapters. I will rewrite the chapters after 100 chapters so this issue will end then but if you are reading the newest chapters then this problem is not there as I know.
ch 0 1 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 1-- The Return V2
Fantasy · QATCOD
Thanks for your advice I'll follow it.
It will be a problem in starting chapters but as the story progresses this problem is resolved. So read till the end.
ch 0 4 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 4-- Imperial academy entrance exam
Fantasy · QATCOD
No hard copies are not available for now
I usually do write "" but in some sentences it is missed but in the story I usually write it
ch 0 1 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 1-- The Return V2
Fantasy · QATCOD
Really liked the opening and how the story is unfolding the first chapter's characters introduction was really good and liked the story along with the character and the world's background
King Of Harem: My Divine Liquid Can Give Exp!
Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING