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Great Start

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I don't know why any Author would think let me show MC's potential woman with someone else, and also make it worst by add so much detail and expect people to like this. Also let me make the MC enjoy that and say "You will be mine." after that. I don't want to wonder/see what will happen in the future, I am out.

It is not bad plot just seen it too many times.

You forgot Luck without it talented people and hard working people will have no life.

I would suggest to get the tags on for the book asap, many decide choose to read based on that.

Isn't his aunt the father figure in his life. hehe

Is it just me or does anyone else think their ability to just disappear into another dimension too overpowered. 1 - safety 2 - basically teleportation 3 - faster cultivation 4 - No limit on number of people getting in the seal 5 - Place is huge / storage ring 6 - People with the seal could bring others 7 - more stuff Don't get me wrong, I like the overpoweredness, but I think he should have worked to make all of this possible. Stealing this treasure from the Hokage, that from Mizukange etc. Just 1 seal doing all of this from the get go seems too much. Can he not just spam this ability.

It is good, but something is missing here. They seemed to be just drifting, what is their goal, what do they want? If you give them something like that I think would be better. Without a goal it reads like a filler or a side story.

I agree with you, he clearly set them up and now they talk like they are friends. Even Konan who would kill because someone looked at him the wrong way, does not care about being sent to their death??? Plus Mizukage has seen Ringo's half-betrayal and no longer pays attention to Mei and them. Mizukage leaving the battle field was just cowardly. How can you love someone and still just leave after that? How could the hokage escape from him and kill someone while he did not do the same? Third hokage is the weakest anyway. Kushina should be dead too?

Someone calls him childish and then he loses control and acts childish

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He killed humanoid monsters everyday, just think it is exaggerated. It is not something new to him. He should be scared, not broken. He should turn the witness to a retard too, doesn't need to kill him. Plus now his secret weapon is revealed.

Congrats on getting contracted, I find MC's that kill so many humanoid monster and not care, and suddenly they kill a human and start puking and scared, over dramatic. Either he should have been like this the first time he killed any thing, or not so exaggerated now. It was not even close up kill, but a bullet. Also leaving a witness...

Thanks for the chapter