Webnovel Author: kibaelnoob - Fanfic Collection

If someone is looking for a story with good spelling this is a very good story and about the characters if I can say something about the new Zuko is that I like that it is not the typical prota that goes to a world because he died and does not mind reincarnating because he has no friends or family and it seems very tender that his main motivation to save the world is to return to his daughter now if we talk about the world is that of avatar but with some changes eg: Azulon is alive and it will be interesting to see how these changes deviate the course of history that the prota knows, conclusion is a very good story.

Being completely honest I like the writing a lot, I like where the story is going and it's pretty cool that it's not the typical I'm a saiyan and therefore I'm instantly the strongest, but I think the author applied a nerf as I find it unlikely that someone who has been trapped all his life in a coliseum wouldn't know any fighting techniques especially coming from a saiyan in which even their lower class warriors are noted to be extremely prodigious in martial arts (e.g. goku that we go over was a lower class warrior and could instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all: goku we remember was a low class warrior and could almost instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all for the rest good story.

Bueno a me gusta como estas haciendo la historia tambien tu desarrollo me gusta mucho me recuerda un poco a endless path donde el prota se hace mas fuerte pero la historia no avanza por su fuerza en conclusion muy buena

La historia esta piola me gusto la escritura y que uses un personaje que por lo general solo lo usan para hacer ver mejor al protagonista,la constancia de actualizaciones podria ser mejor pero no me quejo entiendo que voa tambien tenes una vida