Aziz_Yaakoubi

raw name for those who want to read ahead 人在雾隐村，从叛逃开始

passing all over the place, it's like reading a Speedrun then a slowburn and randomly changing plots worst of all mc has no personality just random states and positions. backstory through hints given is very bad and forced and future plots doesn't look promising

just for those interested in this ff there's is another author translating this tho I forgot the name and it's better and more chapters. I also checked last chapter in the raw and found out he somehow in a deep real relationship with Kiana finality version in the future and probably harem.

does he get human form? or fully non human. also romance in case he did get human form?

unreadable novel, story all over the place with no explanation of world setting or power system, despite them being used every single paragraph. The way it is written and translated is too monotonous, even worse then reading a travel log type of novel, just pure description of what is happening, more like a draft then a story. the characters have no depth whatsoever, mc included and it is in third person so even worse. and the author always using the characters' name and no pronouns are being used to reduce repetition, in a single 5 line paragraph you find a person's name repeated 5 times, made purely of singular sentences.

trash writing style, unreadable. simply putting together a bunch of sentences with no connectors just spamming a maximum 3 word sentences.

read this before starting the novel. IMPORTANT!! I know it's been 6 years since it was dropped but I'm gonna post this review to prevent others from wasting time like me ( even when wasting time reading dropped novels, this shit takes it to another level) this novel is absolute garbage, nothing but plot holes, randomly casting justsus without any elemental affinities with first try, overpowering and abusing beyond logic shadow clone jitsu by making it a chakra power bank and worst of all a romance between a 14 years girl and a 4 years old boy ( who is supposed to be mentally 1 years old since he was in something like comma for 3 years ) yeah pretty much trash is better then this

started well but eventually went off, iIstarted reading it since it was in the 80 chapters and it was actually a fun read despite the very few Chinese slip ups in the translation ( or not, a very good translation that makes you doubt that fact ) however despite the absence of any tags of romance or harem / no harem the story is obviously going into harem route since he is collecting them like pokemons with a minimum of 2 always with him and clearly they are showing signs of liking towards him yet no reaction from him whatsoever so you can't even understand shit about what the author is planning. in conclusion wasted my time waiting for this novel to update when the author is not even bothering with the tags

just finished this novel ( all 500 chapters on 69shi something ) pretty good lotm ff compared to all the other (pretty much ready all SI lotm Chinese ff except witch and angel of church of evernight one) very well written story and no Chinese racism or other typical useless shit at all. very clear names and barely any mistakes of google translate so a clear reading. the story is mostly about him and some chapters in between are about related people in the arc that is being addressed, very good world building and no kingdom building at all. early fights are not clear and few mentions of mysterious abilities in fights (obviously because of his apprentice path) however starting from sequence 5 all fights are very good. story is complete and even reached klein era (last 100 chapters but huried)