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thank you :) I saw your earlier comment too, about the help one. Thanks a lot for that too.
ch 17 Chapter17
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it's kind of a fantasy world, but unfortunately, this is still a real situation in some areas... so how you take it is up to you :)
He decided that she'd be hanged so that there won't be any black spot on their family name.聽
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nope... Steven. what I meant was she was already there waiting when he was escorted by her sisters. :)
At night, Steven was escorted by her siblings to her room. She sat there waiting as nervousness snuck onto her. She heard her husband ('her husband') getting teased by her siblings, heard him patiently answering each and every one of them and saying goodbye to them and the door creaked.
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Yup. There's a backstory. Wait for it ;)
Serena looked at her friend, shocked. She couldn't believe that someone like him wanted to marry her. But soon Molly's words came true.
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No, I really appreciate the suggestions. I'll try to improve it... I'm a newbie after all, and I am here to learn. so, thanks.
On such a pleasant day, a girl could be seen sitting lazily on a tree by the riverside. She had long hair that reached her waist and flowed lightly with the breeze. Slender legs were dangling from the branch that she was perched on as she sat there with her back leaning on the trunk. Although her face was half-hidden with the hat she wore, you could see the clear skin, an elegantly straight nose, and plump red lips half curved in a smile. A sound of footsteps was heard and broke her trance. She turned her face towards the newcomer.
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Thanks for your help. I'll try to improve accordingly 馃榾
When they reached her house, there was a big crowd in the front. Being a village head's dwelling, it was nothing new for them to see so many people at the same time in their house, but this time it felt somewhat different. The visitors appeared to be from the city. There was an expensive-looking car parked outside her home. The person sitting with her father wore a suit and sat there looking elegant like a model. As soon as her father saw her, he signaled her to come towards them.
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Thank you 馃榾
Thanks 馃榾
ch 0 7 Chapter 7
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Thank you
Thanks 馃榾
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
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Thanks for asking. Belated Merry Christmas and New 馃巻 馃帄
ch 11 Chapter 11
For you... My love
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