Webnovel Author: Wahyu_Dwi_S - Novel Collection

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and you make too many mysteries .... in the first world the mystery of his birth and about his power he did not know and you added another mystery in the 2nd world.. oh and also what happened during his meeting with iriana the explanation was too short (1 chapter that's only 10% of that chapter) compared to the sex scene with 2 unclear women with 3 more chapters

The more you read, the more confused you become. I don't have a problem with crossovers, but how can you combine material peak with saint seiya and SMNT/MT in my opinion it's too forced if matreil peak is combined with 3 worlds it's not very suitable.

writing about the world of naruto just to attract the interest of readers. but the contents of the oc character are all garbage. DROPS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!

Lanjut bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ++((!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (! (!!!!!!!!