Webnovel Author: Arodicus - Novel Collection

I’m 50 ch in and there are a number of inconsistencies. His power was f rank then he powered up to e rank then d rank but maybe c rank? Then d rank again. He got a ton of points for killing a boss e level monster but later killed some others that were almost as strong and only got a couple of points ? Then he got to school and trained in his book and got out a few min later but then his bully was already chasing the senior girl for 2 days? Idk I like the idea of the story and I’m all for devouring abilities like rimiru and gobrou honestly I’d love to see more stories like it. This one is quite poorly executed just because of the attention to detail is completely lacking.

I’m on ch 584 at this time. I thoroughly enjoy this story. It is one of the only stories that I appreciate the romantic partner. The system is very background and isn’t extremely op. But as the time goes on mc becomes stronger than anyone at the same level as him. World background has your typical human vs demonic beast troupe with human traitors as well as an outside of the world threat. You learn more about them as you uncover the wife’s background and beyond. I wish the system was a little more forefront and some of the kingdom building stuff went into more detail. I feel the author wanted to write a cultivation novel but wanted to add some hype by giving mc a system. As I said I like the story and will continue to read. It’s a nice read especially if you don’t have anything else.

Early review. I have read 20 chapters so far and I really hope author does improve in writing ability as the story goes on. To start I want to say the author’s biggest mistake at the beginning of the story is saying it has been 5 years since the awakening. It put in place such a hard inconsistency for the whole beginning so far. Mc has had abilities but never trained / leveled them. Mc works on sword aura after being trapped for a few months and humanity in 5 years never unlocked it. We won’t even go into the fact the mc all of a sudden starts using his ability like a pro only after being stuck. The beginning is almost identical to solo leveling as many other reviews stated. Father dissappeared, mother has mana sick body, there is a healer girl “secretly” in love with him… I read SL a few years ago so I figured I wouldn’t mind giving something similar to read. So I won’t say that his start is bad per se. I think the story has potential and it currently has well over 1000 ch so I will give it another 20-50 ch to decide if I want to continue.

I’ve read all the way to the end. Overall it was a pretty decent read. If you like a very op mc that sticks with his goal (improving his provedence) this is a good one. Good points. Mc is op. Remembers his friends through out. Has a clear goal. Chapters are dense about 2-3 chapters in other stories equal 1 chapter here. Bad points. Mc is gullible or extremely dense. Every female character pledges off being with any other man the moment they see mc. Early in the story author goes crazy about repeating names of stuff. Sometimes you will hear the name of the place like 50 times in the same chap. The last 30 or so chapters you can tell author was focused on wrapping up. Just an over arcing sense of things moving fast.

Review at 300ch Mc powers up like a rocket. 17 years old (less than a year of “cultivation”) and over powering people 400 years old. Personally I do like a good op mc so I like it. World background seems interesting. Biggest complaint here is you have the china number one mentality. It’s not nearly as bad so far as I have seen in other novels but it is subtlety there. You can tell it’s shaping up to probably be a harem. I do not care for harem stories especially when the female characters act like the current relationship. Also there is zero build up to the start of the relationship. All of the females that will probably be in the harem that have so far been introduced only want to hug his thigh except once but I’m not gonna spoil in case she is part of the harem as she is introduced early. My overall review is read it if you like super op characters and don’t mind harems. It isn’t the best writing but it is better than a lot of stuff on here.

200 ch review Overall I enjoy the story. The mc story that is. I really jumped into this one blind not knowing anything about it besides the synopsis. I like the idea of a cultivator transmigrating to a modern or really a technological environment. Unfortunately I realized this is a harem story. I still tried to give it a shot but all the women are extremely annoying with their pining. I will say each woman gets a fair amount of back story and aren’t just forgotten about. Also I do want to point out that just because someone is impotent doesn’t mean they can’t have an erection. So when the women are shocked by his dragon and dumbfounded he isn’t impotent makes no sense. The mc is strong most of the time. He is a bit dumb and doesn’t follow through with his own plans of staying put and getting stronger before doing things. Often he is going to get something that has been in a place for years and years and now all of a sudden there are groups looking for the item or something near the item and he has to fight them. You know.. plot just for plot sake.

Generally I don’t like doing reviews before 40 chapters and at this time there are only 7. So far the story is very well written. I don’t see any issues with grammar and the premise is very interesting. Only thing I would point out is the story is already set out to be very fast paced. With glossing over a lot of what happens with short descriptions. He spent 5 days doing this then we get detailed info on something then he travelled and 3 things happened to him but it is summarized in a couple sentences. If you are planning for fast paced 2-300 chapter book this type of stuff is ok but if you plan on 500-1000 ch these details help slow the pace and give a better picture of the world. Overall I have enjoyed the content and hope author keeps it up. I think they have talent in writing

I don’t mind reading and reviewing for people. I checked your page and only see 2 works. I don’t generally read romance novels but could give it a shot if it’s xiaxia just let me know which work it is.

I’ve read 94 chapters. The beginning of the story the 1st reincarnation is great! At this point the real world information is limited and seems like it wouldn’t matter much as entire lives are had in the span of around an hour. The story primarily focuses on these lives. The second reincarnation is quite the cliche china number 1 where the west is evil etc. I think the idea behind the story is interesting but it gets repetitive. Mc is born grows up enough to start training then collects information on whatever power system the world uses spends months or years deducting comes out over powered. Builds a force makes a kingdom dies. The lives take a long time to live thru and the mc basically goes thru two lives back to back so we don’t even really understand why or what the point is. 2 lives is like 140 chapters and in there you have maybe 3 chapters in the real world..

I’ve read 42 chapters so far. This story is quite a good read so far. At the time of writing this review the story is already complete with over 300 chapters. You can tell it will be fairly short after the free chapters as mc is getting pretty strong quickly and with his ability as a disspossessor he can only continue to get stronger. Mc is smart and analytical. World building is very interesting. Background story so far keeps you wanting to know more. Just wish there were more free chapters lol. Now I have to spend free passes slowly to unlock more.

Overall I enjoyed this book. The ending last 30 or so chapters really rushed to finish. Pros: mc is very strong. System is pretty simple to understand. No translation issues. Pace is pretty steady until the end. Cons: when mc fights it is confusing what author means by using x years of cultivation to attack. Once you figure out he is instead using 10% 50% 90% strength it is understandable. Mc just jumps thru the realms to end the story. There are a few loose ends left hanging, they don’t affect the end but seems pointless to be in the story without a wrap up. Overall I gave this a 5 star.

Up to ch 269. Mc is pretty dumb with his system at this point. I don’t want to spoil too much but he gets an injury and has residual energy in his body. Doesn’t even use his system to extract it.. still has the ability to use the system even though he can’t use his qi. Made a complete 180 on killing people. Honestly thinking about the story nothing the mc does makes sense. He could have just holed up after extracting his body and getting 10000x the cultivation speed and leveled up to the top of the world. There is no reason for him to seek opportunities when his system can purify the lowest level spirit stones into the highest level ones…

I’ve read 158 ch so far. Overall the story is pretty good. Mc is very op and his system is stronger than what it should be. I have a few gripes about the story mainly that the author isn’t very strict with the rules of the system. Supposed to be only able to use it so many times a day then uses it a bunch with no explanation the later states the limit increased by 1 use. Mc also so far has not killed any of the people trying to steal is stuff or that know about extremely rare items he has. And they all act like the cliche in the young master do what I say type of cultivators. Mc is also supposed to be low key but then does everything in front of massive amounts of people like crafting a pill that no one else in the world can. Mc gets abilities randomly that he shouldn’t know how to do like creating arrays and weapons. Now the good points of the story. It is translated very well. Mc isn’t so op that he just looks at people and they die. The background story seems pretty interesting. The premise of the system is a good idea. Like your system can correct flaws and such. It’s kind of like library of heavens path but a much stronger system that doesn’t have to cross reference other books to get perfection and effects more than just books and knowledge.