Webnovel Author: Abyss_of_Infinity

Potential for a good face slapping story, if done correctly! The mc is overpowered af, and the story can play on how his emotions and mind develop, making it more interesting. Worth a read.

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Abyss_of_Infinity

6mth

Commented

You're gonna need to pace it differently, introduce higher dimensions or new restrictions to be able to write more. At this rate, in at most 100 chapters, no new ideas will fit into this story, forcing you to discard it. Valid story and system though. Keep it up!

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Abyss_of_Infinity

6mth

Posted

It is far from being the best, yet also far from being the worst thing on this platform. I'm new to this, so although it won't be amazing, I hope you might give it a shot!

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Fantasy · Abyss_of_Infinity

Abyss_of_Infinity

11mth

Posted

Overall a fun, entertaining novel, however it has its pros and cons. Pros: Interesting system, world characters and development. Cons: writing cuality, inaccurate information at times, ilogical reasoning.