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The reason why making it just one girl to be one dimensional is because its going to be boring. She's just going to be there to make him happy, wherein these multiple people, they all have their own goals, approach and so much more different things. But if its just one girl he meets, then its going to be a hundred chapters of back and forth of "I love you, you don't need to worry about anything anymore." Its just going to be that stretched out in a hundred chapters. Its not going to create depth. In some other books I've read like The Notebook, Fault in Our Stars, the plot is not so "predestined" like this book. In The Fault in Our Stars, the one man one girl works because the story revolved around them. Here, the story revolves around Theodore and his socialization on the environment. Its a character development story for Theodore, as its not a story for Theodore's romance. But his journey to overcome his trauma of the past. So adding a one girl one man romance will prevent Theodore's growth because he will just be stuck dealing with ONE personality. But with multiple people, he has this like tsundere (?) not sure, shy girl, assertive girl, royalty girl and much more. I honestly hate romance myself too because of the garbage Nisekoi and Gotoubun was, but this thing was a nice change of pace. You honestly don't know who will end up as the final girl. And that's what makes this book good.

Its... alright. The book is good and the story is good. But it feels like reading those mangas that doesn't have any plot at all. Like Slice of Life mangas. The only plot that I've seen is the dungeons. Its a fun read by yourself, but I guess I don't really see the appeal of vlogging. I'll still continue to read it and check it out in the future again.

The story development is great. Its a fun book and a fun story. But the grammar and spelling mistakes are very annoying to adjust to. I hope the author can be better. I'll be looking forward to it.

I don't understand what you're upset about? Its a good story and the mc has a strong background. And you saying that if he just found one girl and fall in love, then it'll just be a one dimensional story about the two of them. As it stands now, I do think that the author is still pretty weak on some areas especially grammar, but still, its better than a single girl who's just there to make him happy. But here, he basically has a hate for everyone, so that the author can focus on every single one separately.

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Seeing wrong words in a novel sucks. Really shows how unprofessional a writer is. I mean, Grammarly is free so they should try using that.

Agreed with your review.

Oof. I feel ya.

Actually, if you read it even further, you will see how weak he is in that world. He's not an OP character imo.

It's an amazing read. Heavily underrated too. It's an incredible original story. An isekai battle royale. I was really amazed when I read that. I recommend this for anyone to read.