Webnovel Author: Praefactuss - Novel Collection

Start was solid, gave a small peek at what the hardships/problems that the MC will have later on. I'm curious as to how the story will proceed, can't wait to read more.

I had a hard time understanding the story at first. The only way I could understand was because of the title and synopsis. Maybe you can work around being more clear in the story and more descriptive about what happened. The characters are likeable since they seem to be really good friends and are very open to one another. All in all, it's still an interesting story and it keeps me thinking about how getting transported to another world changed ryan so drastically. Keep up the good work!

It's a very light and fun read. Although the grammar can use a bit of work, but I can understand if it's not your first language. All in all, fun to read and looking forward to the story development. I got confused with the spacing at the first chapter but it got better as I read it. Keep up the good work!

It was a good story, but it was hard to read because the lack of spacing. I recommend cutting your paragraphs. Also add more word counts to your chapter since I feel like reading just a bit and it ending abruptly would be bad.

It's a good read, although I would prefer some more context on how the magic worked. The protag is cunning and smart and makes use of his knowledge from the future. I wish we could find out more about the protag himself from before he became Samuel and the things he did. It might help make this image of a smart and cunning Samuel more concrete. Other than those, I love the dialogue and the interaction between the characters. It's also nice to seem some bits of action at the start of the story!

Female lead's personality is engaging and the story is okay albeit confusing to read when it swaps POV from the protag to the person watching the screen. I like the story and how it is progressing. One tip would be to make the system choices a lil bit cleaner to make it easier to read! Other than that overall good read!

Very cute story. It's a breather from all the heavy stories here in the site. Read this if you want a light-hearted story that makes you smile with the scenes and the story!

Amazing read, I love how descriptive the scenes are. It hooked me and let me feel relatable with the MC. I can feel the emotions and actually feel like Im there as an observer! Keep it up!