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Shlok_Vas
male LV 1Newbie writer. Trying to learn...
2020-10-30 Joined IndiaBadges 3
Moments 11
he was getting his ass handed to him with every punch so how can you expect him having fun
I replied sarcastically.
Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas
well his cultivation level was lower than the other so he should be happy because he won the bet even though it was due to pure luck.
Hearing that, the boy started hesitating, but Ho Chen was not the one who would hesitate before doing anything. He suddenly came and punched the boy with his punch the boy got thrown out of the arena and got eliminated. Even though I could feel that Ho Chen tried his best not to eliminate him but since the boy was weak in my comparison and Ho Chen body adapted itself to use the power to fight me he was not able to hold back much and to add more the boy was already standing on the edge he didn't have a place backside to move.
Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas
I guess this line has some mistake.
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Leveling System in Apocalypse World
Action · PBOM2004
that line is my favourite one as well
"Ho Chen, come. I will show you strength is not everything in this world that works with the rule of survival of the fittest."
Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas
thanks i will rectify it
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Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas
Thanks for the review, I will try my best to improve this.
Thanks bro will try to make it as interesting as possible
ch 0 1 BEGINNING
Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas
i don't plan to do that
ch 0 7 Exam Begins
Origin Master
Action · Shlok_Vas