Just want to laugh my eyes out...
will Brenden be his first male disciple or will he be a girl in disguise or will he be a yandere? find out in the next episode of dragon ball z 馃槀
I like him already.
Fantasy 路 Draekai
Thank you so much 馃挄馃槉鉂わ笍鉂わ笍 it means a lot to me.
Teen 路 azunaima
This book is actually good 馃憣馃憤 Love the cover and the settings. Although this is your fifth chapter I'm curious about the characters relationship and interactions. Here's a big thumbs up 馃憤馃榿 Keep up your work and I can't wait for more chapters! Also your writing style is pretty much good, you'll need to be very detailed. Sarangayo馃尯
Realistic 路 Wardp
Bro you're going places. I love your work and I sincerely hope that you'll continue to update your work. Here's a thumbs up 馃憤And another one 馃憤馃榿 Love the way storyline settings. You know I've always imagined how 2040 era would be like 馃
Horror 路 Taida_Suzuki
I'm not sure why I am replying to you but...I love your nickname 馃槑馃槑馃槑Stormzz
Fantasy 路 Cynical_Stranger
That's bogus! Honestly speaking if I were the one who received this message I'd sue you! Just because other authors didn't comment back on your review of their books doesn't mean she has no right to respond to your personal attacks馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧 I mean come on! I read your review five good times and it clearly looked like you are insulting her not her BOOK. I swear that in the future when you publish your book, I'll personally insult so harsh that you will have to report me to the Webb novel site馃槧馃槧馃槇
Urban 路 Toriatim
Why don't you go and write your own novel then you'll know how difficult it is to think of ideas and and cut short some important things in your life so that your fans will be happy and enthusiastic. Oh wait I got it! You are NOT an author!馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧 She wanted constructive criticism and feedback on her book and not PERSONAL INSULTS!馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧
Shut up you harsh critique! I bet you that at the middle of the novel it will be interesting. By the way this book is a FANTASY novel not real life situation thank you very much!馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧馃槧
Hello author 馃槏馃尯馃尯馃尯馃尯 Couldn't get enough of your works please write more 馃槉 the first chapter just sold me away and I am mind blown!馃檰 Don't give up 馃尯馃尯馃尯馃尯 Love your work 馃槏
Fantasy 路 DyaAran
nice work 馃憣
ch 0 4 Thrashy stuff that even stinks...
Based on the storyline, I like this work. I'm really going to write with determination. As far as I see it, the main lead's life would be really funny.
thank you so much 鉂わ笍馃槉馃槝 I'm really impressed with your works.
Fantasy 路 azunaima
thank you so much 鉂わ笍鉂わ笍 I'm still in tears as what you said touched me . love you so much 鉂わ笍馃槉馃槝
I really appreciate your help my dear. I'm grateful for everything 鉂わ笍馃檹鉂わ笍
Thank you so much dear 馃槝鉂わ笍鉂わ笍鉂わ笍 I'll work harder.
I know... I'm shamelessly rating myself and it's really pathetic. I love my book though馃槀 even though I have a lot of work to do on this story. I really appreciate your time, help and support dear readers because it means a lot to me as this is my first book I wrote.
I'll share the honest truth about this author 馃挴. Talented, interesting, brilliant and always good at capturing the readers hearts. I love your book and no one can change my mind 馃槏馃槏馃槏馃槏 I wish that I can meet you in person in real life 馃挃馃挃
Fantasy 路 Soun_Phavin
Never cried so hard before 馃槩馃槩馃枻 Keep writing this book author. DON'T GIVE UP馃尯馃尯馃尯
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Urban 路 Rayne_Rue
With only two chapters and I've been hooked on this book. I love this book and the title is rather mysterious and beckons me closer and closer... and closer and closer 馃枻 Love your work author. Keep writing more 馃槶馃槏馃槏馃槏馃槏
My poor heart...has fallen in love with this book 馃槏馃槏馃槏馃槏馃槶馃槶馃槏馃槏 Still feeling suspense. Great job Author and please write more! The story is one of a kind and the main lead's charisma is addictive. Makes me wanna see this author in real life.
Fantasy 路 Freylingo
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will Brenden be his first male disciple or will he be a girl in disguise or will he be a yandere? find out in the next episode of dragon ball z 馃槀
I like him already.
What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?
Fantasy 路 Draekai