i also agree, the introduction of magic into the world is cool, where everyone can manipulate magic and some are incredibly skilled like ken!
ch 13 Chapter 13: An Unfair Matchup
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rip cra the crusher
ch 12 Chapter 12: Cra The Crusher!
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i also agree with what youre saying g
ch 11 Chapter 11: Grea Village
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I agree
ch 10 Chapter 10: A New Ally?
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Ken's mum seems cool. also looking forward to Ken's adventure, I'm sure it'll be exciting!
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: The Aftermath
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What a paragraph! It ended with a cliff-hanger and I really want to know what happens next! Wonder who the voice could be. The chapter also showed off Ken's ability to fight and I hope he'll fight even more enemies in the upcoming chapters.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: An Intense Showdown
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excellent chapter, it's also interesting how mana can be used to charge swords, making my g ken stronger (also what are powerstones?)
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: The Situation Just Got A Whole Lot Worse
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enjoyable chapter, man like ken
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Problematic Night
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very good chapter, i love the way you introduced magic into kens world and im looking forward to see what he can do with it!
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Where there's a will, there's a way!
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Fabulous chapter, with the new introduction of Zelios, I'm quite excited what type of person he's going to be like and how important he's gonna be in the book. Keep it up, I'd love to see what happens next to Ken!
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: The Knight In Shining Armour
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The first few chapters are spectacular, descriptions of the protagonist, where he comes from and how he's going to be like later in the novel. Overall it's great, however it lacks some details about the other characters. Ken's mother should be more looked at since she's the first character other than Ken and probably the closest person to him. It's great though, looking forward to seeing what Ken does next!
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: A Thief In The Midst
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thanks for an extra long chapter, looking forward to the next one!
ch 20 Chapter 20: A Chance To Grow Stronger [2]
Kenzai
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