Just a lowly author with horrible motivation...
2020-11-06 Joined United States
How would he know if he asked and he didn't mention a title?
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Sci-fi · Tsuriis
Very sharp transition
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Sci-fi · Tsuriis
Some grammatical mistakes still, but I'm seeing a huge leap in writing skills. Keep up the good work!
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Fantasy · Ashu009
You wouldn't capitalize mountain here unless your mountain's name is literally Mountain
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Fantasy · Ashu009
Thank you for your review!
Action will be more prevalent in chapters 4 and above 😎
Why so short?
ch 0 2 Birthday Celebration
Urban · Friendlyauthor121
Split personality disorder?
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Urban · Friendlyauthor121
It's alright for an author to give five stars to their work, right? This is most definitely not shameless... why are you reading this with that look on your face? Stop - I don't like that.
Echoes of Infinity
Sci-fi · TheMizMind