It’s early so still hard to say, but it’s generally well written. It gives very similar energy to Supreme Magus if you like that novel, though given the title and synopsis, it’s likely to take a much different direction. If you like that novel, it seems likely you’ll like this one
Also “Who got”
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Fantasy · Jhaydun
Suggestion is to replace first period with comma. Then end first sentence after “Bone”
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Fantasy · Jhaydun
Jesus Christ bitch, there’s disappointment, then there’s that
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Fantasy · itsron
It’s not on my screen 🤷🏻
He cackled, clearly pleased with his own joke. "Anyway, Frank, you mentioned a military complex. What are we waiting for? Lead the way!"
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
"Awwww, you're no fun," Jason taunted before ripping the beast's head right off it's shoulders in one brutal motion. "Fine! Have it your way!"
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
It’s still early in the story so take this with a grain of salt. The author is cooking up something, and I’m smelling it good. Bear in mind this is not Nuts to Butts immediate nonstop action, but the characters and world they built are lush. You’re going to want to stick with it through the first 8 chapters, when you do, you’ll be rewarded with the payoff the author was building up.
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Typo 😭
Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1