BossaNovaFlare_1

BossaNovaFlare_1

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Just a guy who likes reading, and writing now too

2020-11-08 Joined Global
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1 years ago
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Typo 😭

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1 years ago
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It’s early so still hard to say, but it’s generally well written. It gives very similar energy to Supreme Magus if you like that novel, though given the title and synopsis, it’s likely to take a much different direction. If you like that novel, it seems likely you’ll like this one

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1 years ago
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Also “Who got”

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1 years ago
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Suggestion is to replace first period with comma. Then end first sentence after “Bone”

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1 years ago
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Jesus Christ bitch, there’s disappointment, then there’s that

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I WAS The Rank–1 Hero

I WAS The Rank–1 Hero

Fantasy · itsron

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1 years ago
Replied to Haizao

It’s not on my screen 🤷🏻

He cackled, clearly pleased with his own joke. "Anyway, Frank, you mentioned a military complex. What are we waiting for? Lead the way!"

Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting

Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting

Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1

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"Awwww, you're no fun," Jason taunted before ripping the beast's head right off it's shoulders in one brutal motion. "Fine! Have it your way!"

Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting

Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting

Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1

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1 years ago
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It’s still early in the story so take this with a grain of salt. The author is cooking up something, and I’m smelling it good. Bear in mind this is not Nuts to Butts immediate nonstop action, but the characters and world they built are lush. You’re going to want to stick with it through the first 8 chapters, when you do, you’ll be rewarded with the payoff the author was building up.

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  • Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting original

    Single Father's Guide To Monster Hunting

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG SURVIVAL LEVELUP APOCALYPSE URBAN CONQUER

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    "Daddy, please don't turn off the lights. The monsters will find me." Ana pleaded as she pulled the covers up to her nose. “Don't worry, Ana. There's no such thing as monsters." Frank answered before flexing dramatically, earning a giggle from her, "Besides, if they tried to hurt you, I'd just beat 'em up!" "Promise?" "Promise." He kissed her forehead before he tucked her in and turned off the light. "Goodnight, angel." --- The world changed overnight. A mysterious system appeared in everyone’s minds announcing the detection of a “Breach.” Monsters unlike anything humanity had ever seen before began to emerge, immediately ending one-third of the world's population. And that was just in the beginning. Every father wants to be their daughter’s hero. It’s an unspoken rule written into every man’s DNA. But most fathers aren't pitted up against eight legged abominations. Frank was just an ordinary man; no training, no experience, just depression and a four year old. Yet, he was all that stood between Ana and certain death. If that's the way it was, then he couldn't back down. He made a promise, and he would keep it or die trying. Luckily, the world wasn’t entirely merciless. This "System" granted humanity a fighting chance: otherworldly gifts and powers that defied the laws of nature. While Frank's gift wasn't all sunshine and rainbows, it did give him power. Power enough to hopefully keep his daughter safe, and punish the monsters that dared threaten her in the first place!

    27 Chs 68 Collections

  • Who Needs Magical Talent? I have SCIENCE! original

    Who Needs Magical Talent? I have SCIENCE!

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION GENIUS FASTPACED THESTRONGACTINGWEAK

    (More info on Jason’s past life is in the Auxilary chapter) Jason was far from an ordinary man. Being a world renowned researcher at the ripe age of 22, to call him anything less than a genius would have been an understatement! However even geniuses tend to die when they get shot. But in death, he gained many things: A new life, a new family, a new name, and even a new world! Even better, this new world is filled with magic! If only they didn't have the technology of the middle ages... Now, armed with the knowledge of modern day science, Jason aims to not only to become strong enough to protect his new life as Saivas Anthera, but to test the limits of science this new magical environment creates!

    16 Chs 14 Collections