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BobaCat
I will be honest with you, this is actually pretty good but this should be a fanfic but it should be ok for now...
BobaCat
I will be honest with myself....sadly it doesn't do too well with story and character design/development nor does it do well with world backround but I believe that It could improve.
BobaCat
Well I know it is your opinion on this but I believe that the translation is amazing.
BobaCat
This story adds so much detail and character development. I love the way things are written. Everything about this book is amazing and I just get so excited when it comes to reading each episode.
BobaCat
How do you write a review tho?
BobaCat
Gotta be honest with you, probably the best novel I have ever read.
Well this should be a Fan fiction but it is a pretty good story (even if it is from something that is popular as is). I like the way it is worded.
Dragon ball
Fantasy · CaptainDickRam