Webnovel Author: Shin_Chan_5334 - Fanfic Collection

Let's f ing go

Tftc brotha Also it's paid now, so can we expect more chapters?

I see. He was betting on luck. Fair game.

Wait I'm a little confused. So, MC is fine if she kills his people? That's kinda pathetic? I'm assuming they gonna have the 'talk' once they wake, but if not for the great author's hand, all these people could actually be dead right. I hope he doesn't just simply forgive her for this mess, though I doubt this wuss has any balls to say anything to her. I mean I understand the girl, it's good too, a more normal reaction than the usual, but your MC is just not alpha enough. How he mans up before the paid chaps begin. I don't wanna spend money on a sissy MC

Yh bro exactly. This is a good story and that's why I'm not getting into it. I think a good analogy would be that I come to webnovel for fast food but your story is a gourmet cuisine. It's the type of story I'd buy the whole book for and read in one go. Then wait droolingly for the next book in the series to come.OK maybe not that good but u get my point right. What I want on webnovel is stuff where I'm having a bad day, I see this one dude reigning over it all, a typical power fantasy.So just know that I'm definitely not criticising your work. It's kust not what I'm looking for rn.

Idk man I wanted to like this guy's family but I just don't like it. They reduce his age and almost everything they have done till now has somehow put the MC in a more dangerous position.Also too many characters have been introduced. Too many organisations. I'm a little worried about the future of this story.Maybe I should be happy? I don't know where the story is going so it'll intrigue me right? Then there's the fact that he seems like too small a piece in too large a board. I don't really feel he has any real allies till now either. Ig I'm just used to slightly OP MCs by now. I mean I'm reading litharems instead of epic fantasies so yeah. I'll take a break from this one for now.Best wishes to you my man. I honestly love your MC, dude has brought a smile on my face since the first chapter.

F here i thought I'd get a new chapter

I'm pretty sure I have. I'll give more when I get for today.Keep up the work. PS are a small price to pay. 👌

Uh is this cannon following B's?He joined potter's group, potter being leader and all. Atleast he seems like that for now.See I am all for morally good mcs even griffyndor is fine by me. Just CONFIRM that it won't just be a re-write of the plot with Ron doing something extra here and there. Instead u'll change the story as we progress.My cynic aside, I like how you have written till now, you have a refreshing writing. Hope you continue 😊. Tftc

Bro do keep this coming. I'm loving it.

I'm loving this. Keep it coming. Tftc