See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
Okay then
Oh great! When will it be released?
Nice chapter😎
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Awaking from the strange dream
Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
This is my second review by the way.
Anyways, well done author.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
You even added some explanation in it.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
I even noticed that you have added some scenes into the first chapter of this novel and made some changes in some parts of it, which is a good thing for you and the readers.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
Agreed, the conversation part in this first chapter of the novel is now much better than before.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
But I also don't agree with what you said about the novel not having any dialogue at all and it only has details and narrating only which is not true at all.
An unknown world
Fantasy · Tim.B.Suana