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Barry, a 13 year old boy who wants to enjoy life just like the other kids, but there is just one thing which shatters his dreams. That is his psychic powers which awakened within him at the age of 6.
Once he graduates from primary school and is about to enter middle school, he wanted to enjoy one more night to stay up late to do things that he wanted to do.
Suddenly, he found himself to be unusually sleepy and fell in a deep sleep.
Then, he finds himself to be in another world which is quite similar to his world. But in this other world, there is magic and all sorts of magical beasts and mystical beings.
Follow the adventures of Barry as he ventures into this unknown world, which will change both his life in the reality world and the unknown world.
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Any names, places, events, incidents, company names, trade names, etc. which bears any resemblance in reality are entirely coincidental.
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Hello to all the readers of this novel An unknown world. I'm the author of this novel. I would like to say thank you to all the readers of this novel. I have read some of the reviews written by some of the readers that said they want to know how does the main character of this novel look like, right? So I will give a brief description of the main character. The main character, Barry, is a 12 year old boy who has psychic powers since his age was 6 years old. His eyes are usually droopy with brown eyes but the actual shape is like an almond. He has a heart-shaped face and has a medium build body. The colour of his hair is black with a hint of brown on it and is styled in a neatly combed haircut. And so, there you have it. Hope you guys appreciate it.
The author deserves 5 stars for both writing quality and story development while character design, updating stability and world background only gets 4 stars. My reason for doing so is the author has good qualities in writing and has good pacing for the story while I am just going to see how the main character looks like. On the other hand, updating stability gets 4 star as a sign of support for the author and the world background gets only 4 star because the author didn't say anything about the other world. Overall star rating = 4.4/5 star
Great writing quality and the pace of the story is just right which makes me want to give the author of this novel 5 stars. But, the character design, updating stability and world background of this novel is the only which makes me just want to give it 4 stars. The reasons: i) The author didn't mention anything about the appearance of the main character except only the personality of the main character of this novel. ii) I'm just going to give 4 stars as a way to support the author. iii) The author didn't mention how the other world looks like at all. So, in total, I would just give this a 4.4/5 star rating. Plus, good luck and keep up the good work[img=recommend].
I am giving a 5 star rating for this novel because the author of this novel has great writing style and well paced story. But the character design gets 4 stars because the author didn't tell us anything about how the main character looks like at all. As for updating stability, I was first going to give just 3 star. But after reading the reviews, I decided to give it 4 stars as a way of supporting the author of this novel. Lastly, I will only give 4 stars for world background because the author didn't explain anything about the other world. The overall star rating is 4.4 for the novel. So keep up the good work, author[img=recommend]
This is my second review on the novel 'An unknown world'. The author receives 5 star for writing quality because the author did a good job on editing the novel and improving the quality and the readability of the novel. As for story development, the author gets 5 star for also making sure the readers can catch up with the storyline. For character design, the author only gets 4 star because he never told us how the main character looks like but only shows us his background story. I too would like to know when will the author tells us about how the main character looks like. Next, for updating stability, I will give the author only 3 stars as I am just going to assume that the author is busy at the moment. Last but not least, the novel only gets 4 stars for telling us how the other world looks like in Chapter 8. So to sum it all up, the novel gets 4.2 star rating.
Here are some of my explanation for why I have rated it like this:- 1) Writing quality (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the author bothered to go through his story to improve the quality and readability of the first chapter for the sake of his readers. Which is a commendable thing that the author has done. So, let's say it is as a bonus for getting 5 stars. Not only that, I like how it is now turned from 1st person to 3rd person POV, which is even more attractive than the previous version. The author even added some explanation in his narration and the writing style is indeed great. 2) Story development (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the speed flow of the novel is just nice. Not too fast, not too slow, instead just perfect. 3) Character design (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author did explain to us how the other characters look like which I guess is fine. But I know that all of us here as readers do want to know how the main character looks like, am I right? So, I hope the author will soon explain to us how the main character looks like. 4) Updating stability (3 stars) I am rating it three stars because I guess the author is now busy with a lot of things at the moment so I am just going to give three stars at least for taking the time to edit the first few chapters of this novel. 5) World background (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author only then explained about the surrounding of the other world in chapter 8, I guess? So, all in all, I guess the author did a wonderful job with the novel that the author has made. And keep up the good work, dear author.[img=recommend]
My second review on this novel! I gotta say this is impressive! The author has laid out the plot flawlessly, I am hooked and definitely will recommend this to the new readers.......from review swap thread.
Wow this story is great! The First person POV makes me have chills. It was immersive nonetheless! As a new author, don't stop improving. Try researching and you will find your own writing style. With few edits and finishing touches, your novel will leap in a higher realm. Good luck and congrats on job well done!
Okay so this is a constructive criticism...it's meant to help not attack. Firstly don't write the way you would speak ever. While as a author you are narrating the tale to your reader remember you have to construct the tale in a way that makes it interesting. Since you are starting off you have room to improve and develop. Use of vocabulary is important. Different words that mean the same thing can be used to enchance the writing style.
Need to improve your grammar style and describe the character and the another world a lot more better... and do your best author[img=recommend]!!!!
Hello, I am a just a reader in this app Webnovel. This is my first time reading a novel. Moreover, I don't really know what to say, but I think it is pretty good novel, I guess? Plus, hope to read more about your story.
Wow, what a nice novel. But, I think that you really do need some practice on your grammar and also vocabulary. Keep up the good work though, author.
This novel might still need to improve in terms of vocabulary, but so far the story might be getting better. But, I am quite surprised that the main character that has psychic powers can still lose to someone using magic powers. Hahaha
I think it would still need some more upgrade in some parts of the novel, especially the grammar within the novel and also the vocabulary within the novel. For the rest, I will try to keep on improving it. As for updating stability, the author of this novel could only write when the author has free time. So, it would require patience for waiting for the next chapter to be published. All in all, as the author of this novel, I will say it truthfully that I would rate this 3.8 only. How about you?
This is a wonderful novel indeed. The main character, the characters, the world background and story development are all well thought out. The writing quality of this novel is also great. Hope to read the future chapters soon.
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This is the kind of novel I love. Coming of age story with supernatural power. I really hope the horror element comes into play soon too. Absolutely amazing novel.