not exactly being discrete or stealth taking out a patrol. kinda failed at the start.
ch 185 But Not Having a Title Is More Torturous
Games · Qi Peijia
I agree, it's hard to get behind him with his attitude. Plus I just feel like he isn't really using his minions well, he hasnt even tried to make a magic user, no arrow users, or spear users. But the thing that is really making me lose I terest is the dialogue. everytime she says okiee it just makes me cringe.
ch 33 Mummies in the Apocalypse
Games · Haobo_Zhang
it has a lot of potential but to be honest I lost all Interest. The character simply doesn't make any sense, no one would be that stupid especially after already gaining experience and def not a gamer.
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ok this doesn't make any sense. first off he's a gamer, he would never be stupid e ought to cast a firewall anywhere but on or between him and his enemy, second why would he look for a makeshift weapon. and not cast a spell at the enemy, and third in the dungeon his firewall was too hot to get close too so why would he be able to now? I really do like the book. but it's inconsistencies like these that kinda ruin the flow. I'm not expecting him to be perfect but it should make more sense. no one would be that stupid or panicked after the dungeon experience, especially a gamer.
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ok so I like the concept, writing seems pretty good so far. My only complaint is that yet again in a system novel the MC is hiding his ability for no real reason. it's a world that looks for and protects its saviors so if he told the old man about his ability to level up he would stop at nothing to help him do so.
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i paid atleast $40 in the beginning to buy all the upcoming chapters so if its free now than thats news to me and i need to contact support because i know i paid. Plus i have e efy right to critique a book im reading. im the reader so yes yes i can complain and give a bad review or complain about lack of content.
ch 417 417.Somewhere Else (X)
Fantasy · Arkusar
over half the page was just error messages, i love this book but hate when the writer does this. i have no problem paying for content but everytime i read a chapter like this thats just filler and no content i lose interest and want to stop reading.
ch 417 417.Somewhere Else (X)
Fantasy · Arkusar
im done, I just can't read this anymore. it had sooooooo much potential to be a good book, but no one would be that stupid or naive. not only did he not use his stats he for the second time wasted them. the story is just to unbelievable to stay interested.
ch 0 9 A Stupid Mistake
Universal Power System
Fantasy · KingU