Webnovel Author: Immortal_Orca - Novel&Fanfic Collection

A story. I almost wanted to make another fanfic but I don't feel like I know any series well enough to write about and not leave massive glaring plotholes.

Remembered now that I could've sworn I missed something, and I was right. Regarding her age, she is physically 16 at the moment, however, she's only technically been alive for 12 years because of her 'spawning' on the cusp of graduating from 'toddlerhood' which I consider to be at the age of 4. Her mental age on the other hand is a bit weird since I never planned to have Nana become a 'human' through and through despite not bringing it up in the story. A part of her race might be human but her mind decidedly is not. Another reason I'm skewy on romance and such.

Mostly. In the picture I don't get the feeling that the girl is as tall as I imagine Nana to be, but it's essentially that, a bit curvier in the hips, slighty more muscular and more toned/jacked overall. Don't know if I conveyed her bodily proportions in terms of height and width enough outside of brief descriptions, but in my head I picture Murasakibara from Kuroko no Basket, only slightly taller, as a reference for her general mannerisms.

Back when I wrote the prologue I hadn't yet decided on a grading system, only did when I needed it really, so I'm not sure if I should go back and change it a bit or have 'Special' grade items be a thing for unspecified items you can't really categorize. The Companion Crystal for example, if Trogal had decided not to go the route he did with Nana i.e weak but with potential, a fairly strong being would've popped out instead. So the question is, would it then be a Rare, Epic or Legendary seeing as it's effect could vary to such an extent.

Actually didn't think about that, don't know if I'll do anything plot relevant with it or just say it runs on some sort of ultra battery I never bothered to show her changing and be done with it.

Oh, it took a second until it clicked. "It" wasn't developed by the same company/people that developed VR which is why she had to go get "it" herself. If you see anything else that stands out feel free to point it out! Also made me happy someone liked the story enough for a re-read despite the haphazardness of most of it. :)

I see.