Webnovel Author: Revamping12345 - Fanfic Collection

Very interesting book the characters arent bland but it will only intrest you if this is the type of genre you like to read in the first place, the writting is also great however i feel like some paragraph chunks should be broken up or an easier reader experience, except for that its pretty good, but id wait for the author to update a bit more to have more chapters for a long read

bro failed to hit his pr and died LMAOOO, the characters are incredibly funny and the story doesn't take itself too serious which is nice and a change of pace if you're tired of reading the repetitive serious mc stories

Ok this is kinda of interesting, without spoiling too much there's this prophecy between the two kids and stuff like that, however without spoiling, I like how descriptive you are with the characters and the environment, the pacing is alright as each chapter actually drives the story forward, and the character design is great, you can feel the love the characters have for one another

The writting quality goes up as the chapters go, He update once a day but I was told it was reduce but the amount of words per chapter / quality would go up. Story development is not slow but it changes paces, character desgisns are lowkey perfect taking inspiration from other forms of media, world design is good, a high power ceiling so the mc has a lot of character development to do