Great story and a very original Idea. The writing is on point. One of the best I have recently read. My only complaint is that I wish there were more chapters. But that is a good complaint to have.
You did a good job translating keep it up. Compared to others the it is very easy to read
You can go to archive of our own website and get it for free. Just look up lady Gremorys goblin familiar
I mean that is mahoraga amped by a death binging vow so he dosent need to be as strong as that as he wont be boosted for The vow. Plus idk if mahoraga is actually stated by the narrator to be adapting to Dabyra’s existence or if that’s what dabura is saying and he’s just taking a shot in the dark.
What do you mean Mahoraga adapted to Dabura's EXISTENCE?! Like that's the best "Fuck you in particular" move EVER. Now I'm having trouble figuring out how to bring him into the story without getting a Celestial Nail to the FACE. Oh the moment the Abyss Orders gets a hint of Big Raga's ability, Ren is gonna die.
Video Games · SadGetti
This would be the summon from abyss or whatever it’s called where he combines them but it only makes them slightly stronger.
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Video Games · SadGetti
Totalities only work when one or more of a dead shinigami is fused into an alive one
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Video Games · SadGetti
He can’t use totality unless one is dead
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Video Games · SadGetti
Great read all around one of the best I have read. And probably the only good frieren fanfic, I’ve seen
This one, starfire and raven alone justify this choice
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Anime & Comics · DragoonsWill
It seems fine to me, I would say it’s fine unless you think it’s going to take forever because taking like 2-3 months to rewrite will definitely hurt it but if it can be done somewhat quickly then go for it
As Satan Lucifer In Highschool DxD
Anime & Comics · ITz_DeaD