Hi everyone! I am a human who has a very inconsistent writing schedule, especially around holidays. I'm a huge fan of His Dark Materials, as well. Anyways, please give me feedback on my writing!
2020-12-10 Joined United States
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Fantasy · ButterflyWolf
I'll say more. I'm still coming up with more about that part of the world, as it isn't the most important.
ch 0 3 Chapter 2
Fantasy · ButterflyWolf
Thanks! It is sort of long, but I wanted to make it interesting :D
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Fantasy · ButterflyWolf
Let me change that... A few times per day that I can, which will be a mostly fixed yet hard-to-understand schedule.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Fantasy · ButterflyWolf
Yes. You just realized, and didn't realize when other people told you. XD
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Teen · Elise_Daisy
It's Mamá, if you're writing in Spanish
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Fantasy · Elise_Daisy
This book just keeps getting more interesting.
ch 0 5 Pain
Fantasy · CricketBooks
Now THIS is something I can get addicted to.
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Fantasy · Elise_Daisy
Now that is one good cliffhanger.
ch 0 4 The Others
Fantasy · CricketBooks
This is a great chapter, more people should read this book.
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Teen · Elise_Daisy
Thanks! I will probably upload every few days, but not on a fixed schedule.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Fantasy · ButterflyWolf
Thanks! It's my favorite kind.
This world- all the darkness- was welcoming to me, the shadows- and there were shadows here- seeming to reach for my hand, to pull me along a path lit with dimly glowing rocks. I followed it, and it led me into yet another tunnel. This time, however, I could see the end of it in front of me. I walked through it, and wound up in a smaller, yet no less impressive, chamber. There were carvings in the walls and ceiling, and the floor of polished marble glistened in the dim light from those same glowing rocks.
Creature of Darkness
Fantasy · ButterflyWolf