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Fantasy · DaoistqK1OBL
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
nice building there
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
I really like this guy
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
I like this guy
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
light novel...LOL
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
LOL, stranger things....
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Realistic · Kuroyasha404
*hill?
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Fantasy · Stephanie_Rasanya_1576
I'd be lying if I said I could give a good review after chapter 3 but I'll say that I like how there are many questions which can only be answered by further reading. The pace can do a bit of slowing down too, more detailing, take a moment and really live in it. All in all, the book has potential and I'd like to see where it goes.✌🏽
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Sci-fi · Ashley7Black
I like the book though I think you should reveal more through dialogue than just saying it so we feel like we're reading the book and not like you are reading a book to us. I also think you should slow down in some aspects of the book too. However, I like the way you formed your own terms, complete with the abbreviations and all. Pay more attention to detail, good luck
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Fantasy · Ray_Trev
are bouncers and jumpers the same?
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Fantasy · Ray_Trev
This dialogue is somewhat confusing
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Fantasy · Ray_Trev
where's half advanced in all this? Before advanced? Or after...
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Fantasy · Ray_Trev
Thanks, I'm actually interested. Sorry for the late reply though, I haven't been here in a while. School stuff...
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Urban · Paris_Hills_101