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nice building there

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I really like this guy

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I like this guy

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light novel...LOL

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LOL, stranger things....

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*hill?

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I like the book though I think you should reveal more through dialogue than just saying it so we feel like we're reading the book and not like you are reading a book to us. I also think you should slow down in some aspects of the book too. However, I like the way you formed your own terms, complete with the abbreviations and all. Pay more attention to detail, good luck

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are bouncers and jumpers the same?

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bouncer what's that?

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This dialogue is somewhat confusing

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ascending?

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u know what comes next😂👇🏽

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where's half advanced in all this? Before advanced? Or after...

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