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2021-10-05 Joined Nigeria
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"[Iron Skin]. [Greater Speed]. [Greater Strength]. [Fortitude]. [Strong will]. [Total Concentration]. [Battle Aura]. [Aura Sword]." The Captain chanted, enhancing himself.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
indicating that there is a way to bypass death so early kinda makes the stakes feel a lot less since we all know there's someone with the potential to avert death.
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
I saw this coming 🤣
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
Bad move imo
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
I like the way you think.
" Miss Zephyr has the ability to tamper with one's mind so it isn't a stretch that she has the ability to brainwash us"
Fantasy · LordMomonga_squire
Whoa, creative! What Webnovel inspired this book?
Seeing the first line of defense was decimated, the young man didn't panic, and he calmly brought out an ancient-looking talisman engraved with the words: soul clone!
Eastern · Pizza_overlord
Mountains? I'm confused now.
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Eastern · Pizza_overlord
Doesn't matter, my mind registered him as one.
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Well, I have enjoyed the major bits of the story so far but I find the possibility of me drifting away from that feeling of excitement and enjoyment. I expected the people of the Colosseum to react a bit more than that, you described their reactions in a way that it felt that there weren't as many as you implied earlier and what about the prestigious figures on the elevated platform and the human Gandalf, I believe that it would have been nice if you had depicted their reactions, that perhaps would have built more tension.
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Why do I feel that this contradicts my perceived personality of him?
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I love how you went against the annoying trope of " Nobody found it until a chosen teen did"
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My amicable grammarian🙌
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Sci-fi · LordMomonga_squire
Lol.
Ascension Of The Failed Mage
Fantasy · Magecrafter