Xerophryx - Profile

Great in depth review! definitely highlights the main concerns and positives of the story!

Surprisingly good story so far, and a shockingly well developed world background! I was drawn to it because the title sounds like an absolute mishmash of all the genres. the MC jumps to a TON of assumptions, and barely has a goal beyond "SURVIVE", which is fine, but it definitely feels lost. The MC has remained unnamed for a long time, and he seems fine with it. I just wish he had a name is all. Author tends to reuse phrasing a bunch, especially obvious when speaking about the "ape type" and "ant type" creatures. there are some paragraphs where the phrase shows up 3 or 4 times even when clarification was simply uneeded. It feels almost lazy, unfortunately. the inability to communicate with anything due to being a wolf makes it so the story only has internal dialogue, and I think that's holding the story back. at first I thought this story was going to be a ripoff of Reincarnated as a Slime, but its not! it rather quickly sets itself apart from that story, though it ends up sharing a few themes simply by nature of its genre. the writing is the main problem with the story. its lacking in diversity, but it makes up for it in creativity! The scenes are described well and each new location is as unique as the last with its own collection of fauna and flora. I have high hopes for the story, and I really hope the story gets moving here and the writing improves!