I'm very gay and boring. I read, draw, and write all day, am addicted to Coke Zero, and I'm a Poly-Sci/Law major. If any of you have a lawyer some day, it might be me. God help us all.
2020-12-13 Joined United States
OK. Could you give me more info on how to improve it? :)
First of all. You read so fast. Like, your last comment was on Chapter 2, oh my god, LOL. Also, this, in my opinion isn't the goriest death. I think there was a man that was deboned like a chicken in one scene. My favorite death happens midway through this book.
ch 223 Judge, Jury, Executioner (Night 3)
LGBT+ · H0LL0W
Thanks for reading and for the power stone! I hope you like this silly story as much as I do :)
Shoutout to MansiManu11518 who was nice enough to give me so many power stones <3
ch 206 My Heart Is Warm
LGBT+ · H0LL0W
Dont worry. They dont...you know...
ch 0 1 Chapter 1.1: A Wrinkle In Time
LGBT+ · H0LL0W
It's discussed more throughout the book Revenge, and the book that comes after it. Classism and racism don't seem to be a thing in the beginning because Ace and his friends all hang out around only other astrals, who are all rich and spoiled. Once they leave their comfort zone though, even the MC is a little racist
ch 0 -10 GALACTIC Companion Book: Abilities, Earth's Society, and The Celestial Objects
LGBT+ · H0LL0W
Thank you. A lot of the stuff in there is based off of personal abusive experiences. I hope that whoever is going through bad times will make it out on the other side. :) It feels good when people read my writing, a lot of the chapters are metaphors from my personal life.
ch 0 9 Happy
Horror · H0LL0W
I have read so many online stories and the intro chapter usually makes me drop it from lack of grammar/spelling ALONE, no matter how good the plot is. What good is the plot if the story's unreadable? Your grammar and spelling are IMMACULATE. Please keep up the good work!
ch 0 1 Intro
Stolen By The Moon
LGBT+ · Yaminoyosei