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Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

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Thanks for the chapter!!!!! s2 s2 s2 Excellent work!!!!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2

Thanks for the chapter!!!!! s2 s2 s2 Excellent work!!!!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2

Thanks for the chapter!!!!! s2 s2 s2 Excellent work!!!!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2

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Thanks for the chapter!!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2 Excellent work!!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2 s2

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!! Excellent work!!!! I wonder if the speed of the novel will continue like this, or if it's until the arc of the academy. Because it's starting to get really weird to read, simply put, it feels like i'm disconnected from the novel.And one thing that i think would need to improve is the details, both the enviroment, characters, whitch items they got and earned and how their lives were in those two years and type of training. This lack of information seems strange to me, it seems that i don't know anything about what the protagonists are capable of and their lives, i don't even know what skills they had and how they did it. I understand that the author seems to want to get the arc of the academy right way, but it seems, but it seems to rushed, skipping information and details that prevent a visualization of the novel and the characters, whitch makes the immersion of story low. So what i advise is to try to slow down the speed a little, give better explanations for the skills, items and OZs that you got from the boxes, enviroment details etc... It's still the beginning of the novel so it's easy and quick to fix. Details help a lot with immersion, so in my opinion it's good to put a lot. But not so much to get tiring and in the end forget what i was reading before. One thing i say to every writer i know is to always think the reader is dumb, and needs as much deitals as possible to understand. Besides that, the novel has the slice of life tag, but so far i haven't seens much of it, and i think it would be good to put more parts of it. Thanks for the chapter!!!!! s2 s2 s2 s2 Excellent work autor!!!!! s2 s2 s2

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The chapter was excellent. For me it was interesting that you made her kill the 8 women, it made sense to expose more of the character's ideals. Showing her reflections; from the concepts of freedom to her and everything else. I'm loving this novel. The pacing, the characters, the writing, the background, everything is really good. I'm loving every chapter, and it's interesting to know that you write as a hobby, but your ideas and writing are so good. Thanks for the chapters and excellent work !!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapters.