Webnovel Author: Lentin - Novel Collection

Wonderful! I always stress about world-building, and the world-building is spot on. The characters and the dialogue is realistic and natural. The story development is neutral, not fast- or slow-paced, which is a nice read. It's a good cultivation story, and I really want to see Wu TengFei's development. Definitely going to keep up with the next update. In to the library it goes!

Love the review, Thank you!

Thank you for the review! :D

Like the other reviewer, I was quite confused, given that I've never read a chat novel before. Grammar can still be improved, along with a clearer description on world-building that the story takes place in. Maybe increase a bit more on vocabulary and choice of words. Nevertheless, keep up the good work, author-san! Ganbare!

Everything is perfect! The story progression is in between is neutral which gives it a nice and easy read. The way the world is described is a-okay. I always keep an eye out on world-building because that is what pushes the imagination for readers. On writing quality, your grammar is perfect and there's no spelling mistakes. But be careful when you use actives and passives in your story. Some of your verbs are in active tense, which should be in passive. Definitely gonna keep this in my library! Keep it up, author-san!

So this is what you were talking about, I'm not complaining