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Story is well written and good. Sometimes story feels disconnected fir some chapters well it kept the intrest and maintained the pace. It makes me remember noah balvan from mcs techniques and background . Keep it up Thanks for the story though😋

1.First I would appreciate authors hard work and keep going 2.it certainly is an underrated work it's a gem When I read the reviews at first at thought to give it a try it was one of my best decision Okay let's move on to plot First it deviates from cliche with mc of novel as regressor Well there are many plot twists which certainly I didn't expect loved the work Characters are not 2D but have their own thoughts not existing for plot progression It certainly has potential looking forward to updates 👌 I atleast recommend to try it to see if it's your cup of tea Well drawback is I feel description of fight scenes to be lacking.

Its bit hard to enter the tempo of the story for first 5 chaps not completely explaining about how he connected ina detailed way but its good😅

Looking forward to it

To be honest it really had potential but what ruined the story was the carefree emotionless scenes like the time when assassins attacked them in mansion and his father was left behind it was taken too lightly. Not to offend but it feels bland and emotionless then suddenly a 4 years girls thinking creeps me out it's not like a kid at all. Even more so when protagonist accepts the surrounding acts as it was ment to be natural also how skills were given how he correlates magic and mana were neglected 😔. Just that it doesn't delve in to mechanics or workings or even curiosity that humans have towards new things. Another thing is when mc mom sees him fall from cradle and throw a book on top of himself there reaction doesn't feel natural. Hope u improve in the aspects which I felt were lacking. Well thank you from a complete novel though.

Well mc is quite shrewd. Plot line is good and mostly he just doesn't make it like I am this character called Rio then I will protect my family shit. Author depicts him as an actual broken human whith his broken system. Well Done good job author. Well what I specifically don't like is that he gets an mysterious beings in his head. Well it's my personal feeling though not much. Some times author annoys in a quite unique wat though feels good and sometimes feel annoying😅. Well keep the spirit up and hope to see novel continued till the end and story has got potential to it. 😁

Well it is a good one. Though it might seem like average guy getting Transmigrated to a game world where he knows the plot but it is not I emphasize it is not. There are other factors that come into play I suggest to read and never judge this novel by its Synopsis. Cons: 1.fight scenes are rarely mentioned and described. 2.Also there seem to be pointless pov not all times though 3.sometimes things may not make sense as scene suddenly jumps Well overall it gave me a good time while reading Hope author continues this work and update it regularly.

Well he just changed divine deduction for escaping not just giving up his whole creation

Thanks man searching in google but found in unexpected comment

Well there are too many info dumps which are hard to take in. Also my mind kinda hurts to comprehend too many details. Well atleast till chapter 100 though hope it gives me smooth reading experience as story moves on.

Well how the hell it got published in different account.

Well to be honest first chapters were annoying to read as understanding became bit difficult till the chapters I read story pacing is bit slow not like everyday cliche has bit realism to it. I liked the fact of t/n notes sometimes funny though sometimes annoying😅. At least author is considerate of readers explaining Somefacts. Well keep it up man hope to see this novel getting updated. Well for other readers atleast try it see if it's your cup of tea though it's Definitely mine. Well iam not good at writing reviews. Well I will try to edit it after reading

Am I the only one who feels this story starting is similar to keyboard immortal almost looks similar even the first skill he got through system

Thanks for the content though

Well a good one even though first 20 chapters were but disappointing. Well it improved, authour has a style of explaining through main character through self talk. Well a good one 👍 Though my english may not be good😅