Webnovel Author: davexlee - Novel Collection

first, I love the chapter naming. they are very refreshing and made me want to know more. the plot is enjoyable because it was well written. I was quite fond of the fighting scenes. MC has quite an insight too. overall it was a good story and very enjoyable. the fan of this genre will love it, as well as some new reader like me. keep up the good work, author nim.

I'm reviewing after the first update. The earlier chapter is for the character introduction, it's informative and precise. I like to know how the plot going from here. I have a suggestion, maybe the author shouldn't use the punctuation mark as the way to stress a word or sentence. In my personal view, this kind of use a little bit hindering the readers' rhythms of reading. But overall this is a promising start! I'm waiting for more updates, I'm cheering on you author nim.

It's very informative, fast face slapping. Golden duo between the MC and fluffy haha. I can vividly imagine everything from your words. There were some errors punctuation mark but thankfully not disturbing the reading rhythm. Oh, that father and brother's of Yvonne? I hate them. Thank you. In a way a reader would hate 'villain' of course, not about how you write characters. Other than that I really enjoy your story. Can't wait to move to next chapters. I'm cheering on you, Author nim.

It got posted before I finished my review 😂 anyway, moving on. The leads are so funny with each other. Writing this in 3rd person view make the situation so much humoring because each and every character was guessing each other's mind. The main idea is easy to spot, very enjoyable to read and its moving to more promising chapter. Keep up the good work dear Author🥰

I love how the characters interact, they were lively without making your words seems messy. I have a suggestion, to be more careful with the punctuation mark. For me personally the forgotten space or the unavailability of punctuation mark kind of ruin the mood but it's only something minor.