well written and very flowy from my point of view. I love the Mc, he has that frank yet childish kind of nature with a bit of mischief. the parent is no joke, I enjoy their interaction. it was very lively. my personal favorite chapter is chapter 6, the way you presented the information was well thought and easy to understand. all in, it was a good story and very enjoyable. I'm rooting for you, author.
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I do have a Lucas in mind馃槀
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Fantasy 路 Lou_Eli
Me! Me! Ask me!
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Me too, I've slapped hard.
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I'm in for the title. periodt.
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I choked on my drink, please this is too funny馃ぃ their interaction is gold. I'm sold.
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Generally speaking, she ain't your regular mom
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Book&Literature 路 eyaggelia146
As someone with the aim to "kill people" I actually do find this sentence very useful, I'll use it next time 馃槀
"I dont like the world kill. It is too savege. We will do something more elegant. We feed on pure energy. Just the past millenia you have discovered that the physical connection between humans is more tasty and nutritious. You dont need her healthy or sane to make a meal out of her. We simply want her alive."
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This one hit home馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ sounds like my writing deadlines
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Book&Literature 路 eyaggelia146
Anything with mother in it, can be a start of a joy or a disaster. No in between - at least in my life.
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Book&Literature 路 eyaggelia146
first, I love the chapter naming. they are very refreshing and made me want to know more. the plot is enjoyable because it was well written. I was quite fond of the fighting scenes. MC has quite an insight too. overall it was a good story and very enjoyable. the fan of this genre will love it, as well as some new reader like me. keep up the good work, author nim.
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Fantasy 路 SarushiroEruma