The story is interesting, but for some reasons, I think you need to make it more like appealing that every time a reader reads a line or two they will get hooked on it. :) But the story itself is good.
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The story is interesting, but for some reasons, I think you need to make it more like appealing that every time a reader reads a line or two they will get hooked on it. :) But the story itself is good.
Tales of the Demon Lord
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